A generic as hell story with awful pacing.
I really hate when these stories try to present themselves as being all about effort and reward yet the main character is given special privilages from a generic chapter 1 "god". Worse yet, the "effort" they describe doesn't actually require any kind of ingenuity or thinking ability. It's always the same boring "use up all your magic power to grow your capacity, feel magic and say the name of a spell and the spell is cast" type of lazy bullshit, lather rinse and repeat. There's never any need for the main character to actually research or try to figure anything out himself or even develop his own style. Just throw in a time skip every chapter so that the story doesn't actually have to describe any sort of development and get right into the harem building as soon as possible.
I really hate when these stories try to present themselves as being all about effort and reward yet the main character is given special privilages from a generic chapter 1 "god". Worse yet, the "effort" they describe doesn't actually require any kind of ingenuity or thinking ability. It's always the same boring "use up all your magic power to grow your capacity, feel magic and say the name of a spell and the spell is cast" type of lazy bullshit, lather rinse and repeat. There's never any need for the main character to actually research or try to figure anything out himself or even develop his own style. Just throw in a time skip every chapter so that the story doesn't actually have to describe any sort of development and get right into the harem building as soon as possible.
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