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@Serenata so lets actually count
one with the clown
one with the snake girl
one at the end of the chapter
Now let s add the "you beat me no not quite" from the vilain
one with the one under the dragon spear
and one with the pile and the end of the chapter
That make 5 in ONE chapter and none where interesting in anyway (that a feat)
and the character telling obvious thing in case the reader did not catch up make it seriously hard to take it ... well seriously
one with the clown
one with the snake girl
one at the end of the chapter
Now let s add the "you beat me no not quite" from the vilain
one with the one under the dragon spear
and one with the pile and the end of the chapter
That make 5 in ONE chapter and none where interesting in anyway (that a feat)
and the character telling obvious thing in case the reader did not catch up make it seriously hard to take it ... well seriously