Tensei Teido de Mune no Ana wa Umaranai - Ch. 1

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kinda meh tbh
  • summoning people from earth to probe them for knowledge, which they don't even do in a meaningful way (and which i guess will be completely forgotten from now on). could have skipped this completely and just summon people because they can choose blessings and we probably wouldn't lose anything.
  • i kinda like the idea of a world = god's arena, with evil ones commanding dungeons and benevolent ones being de facto guild leaders
  • expanding on that, we got an actually good idea from the author - actual recruitment and roping potential adepts to specific guilds. that was kinda fun and some politics, both inside the guild and between them, could be a nice addition to the story. can use it as plot hooks, can use it as comedic element, but we probably got this bait and switch with promises of power vs reality of brutal training later and this will be all of it.
  • i liked adepts being in the thousands, but still essentially very powerful independent mercenaries that (at least for now) get proper recognition for their skills.
  • lots of completely unnecessary info dumps/decisions that make no sense and serve no purpose. why is this planet so huge? what does it matter? why can't it just be "seemingly endless dungeons we are losing fight against"?
why did he train for 25 years? why have him age 25 years, if his appearance doesnt change (i know i know life magic slows down aging trivia), he doesn't learn absolutely anything other than his skill in these 25 years, and has the same same maturity as ~40-45 year old man as he had at the beginning (which is around ~13 anyway).
- worst part - mc is another typical pathetic beta, i was unloved my whole life and died like a dog, now i'll make slave harem and make them love me!
i wouldn't mind it if his reason to start/continue training was to make insane amounts of money and buy enough baddies with a sad history to switch a girl each nut and not have to repeat a pussy for a month. i'd probably like it a lot.
i wouldn't mind it if his reason was finding pure love, or being acknowledged, or world domination, or whatever else - just don't make him so pathetic. even worse, 25 years in, he is still clinging to that. this shouldn't be there, and if it already was, should have been used to rope a dumb teenager to sign up and then dropped. it wasn't, so lets hope it will be dropped in ch2.
 
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If the planet is many times bigger than earth, then the gravity would be many times stronger and the air many times denser. This would have many implications, among which that bipedal animals such as humans, and trees, would be shorter and stockier.
 
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I don't mind despicable MCs (looking at you Yard), but this MC's thought process is weird. The female knight is sus, but her initial offer was sound. Getting rich by being a doctor is a legitimate reason, and her wanting you to take is logical as well. She's a knight after all.
When she mentioned getting a slave harem, it should've made her more suspicious.
But when she mentioned the love potion, alarm bells should be ringing everywhere. As there should be nothing that prevents the MC from using it on HER. Would anyone actually push this path on others? Strangely the MC fell for it hook, line and sinker.

Suspicious of everything, but then falling for the most suspicious offer in the whole chapter.
 
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This is like a worse version of "The Wrong Way to Use Healing Magic"
I think you got "The Wrong Way To Use Healing Magic" confused with "Redo of Healer". The Wrong Way To Use Healing Magic is an isekai that's pretty good in my opinion, doesn't have the slave stuff in it. Redo of Healer is the one with slave harem.
 

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When she mentioned getting a slave harem, it should've made her more suspicious.
But when she mentioned the love potion, alarm bells should be ringing everywhere. As there should be nothing that prevents the MC from using it on HER.
I understood it that many people? most people? everyone? can own slaves. But by becoming adept, he'd be allowed to (legally) use love potions (it would probably be whole class of mind altering drugs/magic in a more serious scenario) on valid targets, in this case slaves.
Kinda like gun laws - even if you can legally own and use it, you cannot shoot random people.
 
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Tho. Dunno why healing? It seem the instructor is intentionally "leading" him into being a saint because the mc never know what profession he gonna chose.

What is her goal here?
 
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Tho. Dunno why healing? It seem the instructor is intentionally "leading" him into being a saint because the mc never know what profession he gonna chose.

What is her goal here?
She wants more Life Adepts. Life Adepts are exceedingly rare. Life Adepts also aren't all about healing, if the training wasn't tipping you off.
I appreciate them including the slave stuff in the beginning and the mc's mindset on it. Wouldn't want to get invested and have that bs dropped on me fr
Spoiler from an LN reader, the slave harem is a lie.
 
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Clearly they are brainwashing them ... look like a really dark ( or just bad ) serie

Also the autor is a reatard , even if they cant individualy build a car they can create the base of the scientific and industrial revolution need to acces the level on technologie they desire...
They are like " oh you cant magicly shit some advence blueprint , well to bad you go on the frontline" the fact that the MC do not note it in the back of his mide is proof of the bad writing . Add to it the love potion / slave harem that the MC accepte way to fast we are for a really retarded ride.

What a waste of a good artist working for a bad story
 
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Heck, they have MAGIC that can reverse death.
Glean the high-school physics and basic principles, then substitute everything that requires metallurgical and technical research with MAGIC

Skip ICEs, go straight for electric motors and dynamos. Energy per gram is meaningless if you can conjure energy via magic.
Rare-earth permanent magnets though? Yeah, they're on their own with that. Even fantasy magic has nothing on that stuff.
They look more the type that enslave someone capable of fire magic and encase him in a pseudo magic motor and roll with it ... clearly a dystopia.

"Your car make a lot of noise today " sceem of agony "i may need to go change the motor this week end ..."
 
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I think you got "The Wrong Way To Use Healing Magic" confused with "Redo of Healer". The Wrong Way To Use Healing Magic is an isekai that's pretty good in my opinion, doesn't have the slave stuff in it. Redo of Healer is the one with slave harem.
... No? I wasnt talking about the slavery part.

[The Wrong Way To Use Healing Magic] is an Isekai where the protagonist has a healing ability. He was then mentored to become a fighting healer. Both MCs use their healing powers to fight.

[Redo of Healer] is also dogshit so there is no way in hell i was talking about that
 

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