I see... I'll work on it. Thanks for the feedback much appreciatedYou need QA.... The flow of the conversation is not that bad but you need some proofreaders.
I see, I'll make the next chapter more readable.Not sure if this is MTL, but the translation was rough.
tell me if you have a discord or something, could help you proofread stuffI see... I'll work on it. Thanks for the feedback much appreciated
Yes my discord:thedevilsnatchertell me if you have a discord or something, could help you proofread stuff
Thank you for the chapter, good sir!I see... I'll work on it. Thanks for the feedback much appreciated