The 31st Piece Turns the Tables

Dex-chan lover
Joined
Sep 3, 2018
Messages
354
a few chapters in and it kinda seems like they just blatantly mashed together omniscient reader and solo leveling -
all of Earth is dropped into a death game for the amusement of gods who watch and comment as if it's a livestream, donating coins to people they like, while the MC is a disaffected Korean guy who has an advantage because he's already seen everything that the game can throw at you and knows how to maximally exploit everything. then he uses shadow magic on the people he defeats, which get more powerful and more intelligent the more they develop
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 22, 2023
Messages
294
The writing is so atrociously bad don't bother reading it.
The MC is like: I have been playing this for 17 years, now that my life depends on it, I choose the only class I don't know and only have a vague idea that it might work in theory (like a dark souls full luck build)
 
Fed-Kun's army
Joined
Jul 31, 2023
Messages
56
Why are there observers (chat)? I don’t even think they’re gods since one said something about “being at the forefront of humanity”. So fucking annoying.
 
Member
Joined
Mar 17, 2019
Messages
240
I’ve never been so disappointed, how in the Nero did this shitfest get a rating of 8? I thought it would get better in the later chapters, but it’s been an absolute snooze fest. MC has obvious plot armor, and since there’s no comedic aspect to it, it’s just cringe and boring. Apologies to the people who read this, I pray you get to read a better story next time.
In essence, this story has mediocre writing, MC has no personality, nonexistent world building, stupid copy pasted ideas with no substance, this could not be enjoyed even in my sleep.

Enjoyability: 2/10 - Very obvious plot armor, waste of time.
World Building: 1/10 - Very focused on the boring main character.
Art: 5.8/10 - While the art isn’t bad, it just feels bland.
Main Character: 1/10 - Most bland character I’ve ever seen, no personality, even flour has better personality.

Overall Rating: 2.45/10 - On behalf of the author, I apologize to the people who wasted more than an hour reading this.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Aug 9, 2020
Messages
563
taking into account how people usually rate series like this, this should be at max a 7.5/10. no idea how it's at 8.5/10

personally, i started getting weary at chapter 3 and couldnt get past chapter 5 due to the horrendous storytelling so far
 
Joined
Jul 15, 2024
Messages
20
The writing is so atrociously bad don't bother reading it.
The MC is like: I have been playing this for 17 years, now that my life depends on it, I choose the only class I don't know and only have a vague idea that it might work in theory (like a dark souls full luck build)
For those that missed it, he does clearly explain his reasoning for this. In his dream, he'd always been in a party with specialized roles. The class he chooses is more versatile, suited towards being a solo player.

Lots of hate in this thread. I guess the people who like the series don't bother to leave a comment. In my opinion the concept here is relatively fresh, compared to some of the other slop in the genre. The art is good, albeit a bit generic. I'm about 20 chapters in and still enjoying it.
 
Active member
Joined
Apr 7, 2018
Messages
92
I've reached chapter 8 and... It's shit, it had a promising start but when shit fast.
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top