@RisdonGP Good job with the colours on the characters font. I especially liked that you used colour and font size to emphasize some speech like the “shut up!”. I would agree with
@rienrien that the font choice for the god does bubble together a little too much to combine it with the gradient colour scheme you have. The second font and colour style you have for the god to emphasize his more sinister speeches is better visually. I would still play around with the font a bit to see though. You want something easy on the eyes so people don’t need to stop scrolling to read. I am liking that you are using different fonts, styles, sizes, colours...etc to emphasize emotions and emphasis in the speech bubbles.
This series I have been having issues with where it feels static and not fluid if you know what I mean. When I read some other works I can imagine movement in the scenes, expressions, emotions...etc, but this one because of the pacing, info drops, cut scenes, art or something else I am not getting that experience. This chapter was far more enjoyable and i think with some continued work with the grammar/syntax and styling for the text it’ll help fix the flow issues of this work and make the reading experience more immersive.
Thank you again for the hard work.
@MolaCola those chapters were done by other groups and they are available on aggregator sites. They have not been uploaded to mangadex.