Okay this was pretty hard to follow, but not impossible. I will say it was to the level where it blurred the meaning and interfered with my ability to understand what the freak is going on (and that’s the only time I’d mention an issue with it). I think the only problem is how it flows and transitions. A good reread after you translate it to make sure everything is easy to follow and works in context is all it feels like it needs. The translation itself feels fine, and honestly I don’t speak/read Japanese or have read the raws, so as long as it flowed nicely and made enough since with the scene, I couldn’t really complain. Or don’t. Either way thanks for the taking the time to translate this at all. The story does seem interesting and I can more or less follow it. Right now it just feels like there’s a really huge, not calm ocean between me and the author (I’m not gettin every meaning or joke or what exactly is being referred to). I mean, I’m not going to not read the free translation online nor will I insult someone for doing a free service to make a technically illegal free story available to more people.
As far as story wise, this was an interesting chapter. So the MC can basically just do or get whatever he wants to happen or make anything happen by wishing for it really hard. Noice. Actually fairly interesting and should be fun to read a story about as long as the story doesn’t take itself too seriously. It doesn’t feel like typical opness, but more like if you’re really rich (and kinda omnipotent) grandparents were following you around and just want to make you happy. This is one of the powers I’d like to have, and I’m interested to see where the author goes with it. The corrupt church does feel a bit overdone though. I just hopes the mc deals with them quickly to keep things from getting pointlessly serious