The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way - Ch. 3 - Day 2

[jokerxhisoka]

I don't really get it but didn't she get run over by those guys in the previous chapter? The jap readers were sad about it in the author's twitter. xD

 

[Khalifas1]

Oh goddamn it they’re not blood related, just when I thought this was gonna be a slightly normal manga lol

 

[equationx]

I don't really get it but didn't she get run over by those guys in the previous chapter? The jap readers were sad about it in the author's twitter. xD

Yeah, i just saw it as well on author twitter, now i'm sad that the story actually went that way

the alternate ver. i mentioned on my comment earlier is the brother ver. that are on ero-sites, which was fine with the other reader as well, what they don't like is that it turned into a different kind of story with those guys since it feels unnecessary to went that way (could be salvageable with damage control making it a what if, but seems like it's not a what if and considering how wholesome this day 2 are, it's just dumb choice from author)

 

[lmao_moment]

* U N r e L a T e D *


W H O C O U L D ' V E G U E S S E D

 

[weleasewodger]

Day 3, I decided to feed my cheeky gyaru sis some sausage 🌭 ....

 

[TestAddress]

Thank you for the translation!

I was hoping that he would make her body "understand" as in R-18 version.

There is an R-18 version? The Fantia ectra page???

 

[gundulgondrong]

they step siblings bros.. time to disperse...

 

[motheblackcat]

Yeah, i just saw it as well on author twitter, now i'm sad that the story actually went that way

the alternate ver. i mentioned on my comment earlier is the brother ver. that are on ero-sites, which was fine with the other reader as well, what they don't like is that it turned into a different kind of story with those guys since it feels unnecessary to went that way (could be salvageable with damage control making it a what if, but seems like it's not a what if and considering how wholesome this day 2 are, it's just dumb choice from author)

Agreed, having her raped (cause that's what it is ><) chapter 1 to trying to go 180 wholesome right after do seems like bad writing :/ Author prolly thought (wrongly imho) that the shock value was needed (it does make ppl react but not for praising the quality of the work heh)

 

[equationx]

Agreed, having her raped (cause that's what it is ><) chapter 1 to trying to go 180 wholesome right after do seems like bad writing :/ Author prolly thought (wrongly imho) that the shock value was needed

yeah, at least the brother ver. iirc is an alternate ver., but the current fanbox one doesn't seem to indicate that, which i'm hopefully to be wrong

like, no one reads a feel good story to be slapped by that kind of shock value

 

[velatic]

Morning sickness?

 

[motheblackcat]

yeah, at least the brother ver. iirc is an alternate ver., but the current fanbox one doesn't seem to indicate that, which i'm hopefully to be wrong

like, no one reads a feel good story to be slapped by that kind of shock value

Indeed, well let's just keeps our fingers crossed!

 

[TestAddress]

Familia

Yes. Actually once you adopt a sister you cannot marry her because she is already family.

 

[TestAddress]

Indeed, well let's just keeps our fingers crossed!

Let's wait for her texboz to become pure white.

 

[slyss]

Yeah, i just saw it as well on author twitter, now i'm sad that the story actually went that way

The train of thought of the mangaka was that of:

Day 0:

Brother: "Sis, if you go out like that, something WILL happen..."
Sister: "Shut up"

Day 1+Fanbox: She gets drugged and gangbanged

It's a very... cheap way to get the point across, as there are plenty of better ways to convey this message without resorting to the absolute extreme. But, at the end of the day, we need to remember that these stories are often the fuel for Fanbox.

Also, the translation of the first chapter wasn't exactly the best, as she was introduced for some reason as a "Shitty gal," when, in reality, it should've been "Shitty Gyaru Bitch." Which doesn't exactly make the situation better, but I guess it better conveys the mangaka's original intention for the character from the get go, as "Bitch" in Japanese is used in a harsher way than in English, akin to "Slut". (Again, not like it justifies the situation in any way or shape)

 

[cathodex999]

How wholesome....if we ignore the fact that he already groped her in her sleep lmao.

 

[custynee]

 

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The train of thought of the mangaka was that of:

Day 0:

Brother: "Sis, if you go out like that, something WILL happen..."
Sister: "Shut up"

Day 1+Fanbox: She gets drugged and gangbanged

It's a very... cheap way to get the point across, as there are plenty of better ways to convey this message without resorting to the absolute extreme. But, at the end of the day, we need to remember that these stories are often the fuel for Fanbox.

I get what you mean and i get why you wrote that as well, i don't disagree at all

Though, i think it's exaclty the reason why some people went "???" considering how the mangaka goes with the story flow, like, despite her being called what she is, you can tell she's not the type of character that actually are like that, as in the behavior of said character (sister) is that she's completely nervous or afraid on top of what the other girl said in that same chapter(1)
And the brother appearing in front of her in the front door of their house with convenient timing +bottle of water ready makes some people assume things might've gone differently since we don't get to see what actually happen between panels before she came back

side not : i actually made a comment on the day 1 chapter 2 or 3 days(?) before the author released that fanbox ver. saying that the story might not go that way, which made me disappointed because i found out about this fanbox today after reading the day 2 chapter

 

[GolfAlphaMike]

If she's not blood related... she's free to be dated.

 

[shinshom]

Wincest route?

 

[Hicleric]

It'd be great if the author completely flipped the script and made this a nice non-romantic SoL about found family, the intrinsic value of those rejected by society, and all dat warm fuzzies

But raging simps society often do not let us have nice things