The Devil's Daughter

[MangaDex]

 

[LunaDW]

Okay, sure. I'll subscribe. I'm into daddies.

 

[KarolinPinguin]

I hope her "dad" won't be her love interest

 

[Internext]

@LunaDW lol

 

[loserface583]

lol wtf

 

[eunicekay86]

It’s weird.....

 

[SaphireE90]

Okay...?

 

[asdfghjkk12]

I don't understand a single thing that's happening...

 

[angsally]

lol the clothes keep changing and the time of day keep changing too

 

[LaCondesa]

The pace is wierd...

 

[Nylodale]

The pace isn't just weird, it's downright horrible.

As good as the art is, it can't compensate for the fact that the author has no idea of how to make a story go from A to B.

 

[Mary_2000]

The chapter are suuper short and the pacing....no comment

 

[GhostZilch]

Its feels like some pages are missing but idk

 

[Seventwentyseven]

Lmao what

 

[Spookie]

From reading the story alone you can tell this is a manhua lol.

 

[Ysoul]

The plot is incredibly way fast and chapter was rlly short but I'll bookmark it cause my heart was captive by her daddy

 

[Ryou]

Sometimes I go into Chinese comics just to see if people complain about the pacing, and 99% of the time its there.

What is with that? Can't they just slow down for once or try to make sense.

 

[Ty_next]

The characteristic of many (Chinese) manhwa : A super-fast pacing. From A to J or A to Z? Lol

 

[mimisan]

wow the premise sounded interesting, despite my reservations of non japanese comics, i thought i'd give it a try. Turns out its really just a shitty doujinshi. Shit art, shit pacing, and so few pages per chapter to progress the story...

 

[Nogoodimaginativename]

This makes no sense - And I'm not talking about the translation, it's alright.
The story and dialogue.. and the characters' actions too - nothing makes sense, I can't make heads or tails of the plot and so I'm dropping it.
(I got to Chapter 7)

I appreciate your efforts to translate it though!