The Girl, the Shovel, and the Evil Eye

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trash should be dumped outside and beast that taste human blood should be disposed off
why should it be different just because it looks human?

read it, its at the very least better than average
 
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Hope we get to see him kill that asshole that recorded him die somehow

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Well, for lack of anything better to do and wanting to know what happens myself, I gave a shot at the WN, if anybody wants to take a peek.

...If nothing else, it should be marginally more readable than a raw MTL dump.


Last update: 15/01/2021, c5.1
15/01/2021, c5.1; Paused for a bit because the writing is, frankly, annoying as hell.
14/01/2021, c4; For the love of all that is holy, man... stop standing around in shock with an internal soliloquy.
12/01/2021, c3; ...This author has awful chapter transitions, and so much redundancy...
12/01/2021, c2
12/01/2021, c1
11/01/2021, c0
 
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First 3 ch was good, until "status window" made its appearance, AND the people in that world are aware of it. It then became shit.
 
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First 3 ch was good, until "status window" made its appearance, AND the people in that world are aware of it. It then became shit.
 

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