The Hero Trained by the Worst Demon King Is Unrivaled in the School of Returnees From Another World
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Ugh, it was good at the start but I had to drop because of the mc. He is such a wimp considering he lived through 30k years I can confirm it's bullshit when there was another manga where mc pressed a button and trained for 10000 years and the difference? He actually shows him having ptsd, forgetting the faces of his parents, forgetting what is the point. What's funny is that there's a 20k difference and somehow that was more realistic. In this one he just doesn't have it? Is he restarted or something? Ain't no way he acts like some adolescent young boy getting groomed by a busty woman. Like he literally is a simp not taking action just because he "doesn't want his mommy to get found out" even though he should be the strongest after training for 30k years 🤯. This is one of the trashiest isekai tropes I've seen a long time. And I'm an isekai/harem connoisseur and even I can tell it's ass. But gotta give respect to the art at least, it's phenomenal.
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just one of those bottom-barrel story, but somehow it got good artist, even nice looking demon queen. author just throwing whatever into story, without believable consequences and progression.
like seriously, 30k years??? with little to no char development for the MC, you would think he only spent 3 years at most with the Demon lord. adn apparently he cant just wreak havoc for some reason after he come out from the abandoned world. you would think he already achieved godhood
like seriously, 30k years??? with little to no char development for the MC, you would think he only spent 3 years at most with the Demon lord. adn apparently he cant just wreak havoc for some reason after he come out from the abandoned world. you would think he already achieved godhood
Making the 10,000+ year old have the maturity and personality of a middle school kid going through puberty wrecks the story. It makes it cliche, boring and cookie cutter. It ruins the well set up overpower character idea. He can't get what he wants through power, IE a normal and carefree life.
If the author wants to go with having the awkward kid, but tens of thousands of years to gain his nigh unmatched power that is fine, just give a reason for his personality reset. Luckily there is a perfect one that reinforces the actually given story. The Most powerful demonlord wants a normal life.
If the Main character intentionally reset his maturity and potentially some memories to that of a middle schooler just starting puberty that would work as an explanation. That is just the point of "normal" the demon lord wanted to start their new life from. It reinforces the "wanting to experience a new normal life" stated goal of the story and characters.
Maybe it is a dumb reason but it would make suspension of disbelief for the MC's maturity easier by giving a somewhat logical reason why he acts the way he does.
It sucks cause the rest of the set up is a solid enough twist. If you want an extremely OP MC give a goal or goals that can be simply achieved by their OP abilities. In this case, the Demonlord that was born to be strongest wants to have a life not built around being the strongest villain. That can't be directly or simply achieved by power.
That Time I got Reincarnated as a Slime is one of the best examples of this idea executed well. The town and it's people can be hurt, Rimuru can barely be defeated in combat.
The Misfit of the Demon King Academy 1st season did it as well. Manga and originally story less so. Anos Voldigoad carries the story alongside the 2 sisters who near instantly(first episode and 4th episode) acknowledge his extreme power. Anos wants a world of peace and has near omnipotent powers but the story isn't about his power, just how he shapes the world around his will with comrades/love interests/bro-mance.
Eminence in the Shadow does the OP MC by having the main character be the embodiment of players in a table RPG game ruining the Dungeonmaster's story. Shadow comedicly and constantly ignores the story and NPCs of the DM. The twist is there is a serious story being told by all the other characters. Shadow is just Haruhi Suzumiya and effectly in a completely seperate reality from everyone else.
/rant
If the author wants to go with having the awkward kid, but tens of thousands of years to gain his nigh unmatched power that is fine, just give a reason for his personality reset. Luckily there is a perfect one that reinforces the actually given story. The Most powerful demonlord wants a normal life.
If the Main character intentionally reset his maturity and potentially some memories to that of a middle schooler just starting puberty that would work as an explanation. That is just the point of "normal" the demon lord wanted to start their new life from. It reinforces the "wanting to experience a new normal life" stated goal of the story and characters.
Maybe it is a dumb reason but it would make suspension of disbelief for the MC's maturity easier by giving a somewhat logical reason why he acts the way he does.
It sucks cause the rest of the set up is a solid enough twist. If you want an extremely OP MC give a goal or goals that can be simply achieved by their OP abilities. In this case, the Demonlord that was born to be strongest wants to have a life not built around being the strongest villain. That can't be directly or simply achieved by power.
That Time I got Reincarnated as a Slime is one of the best examples of this idea executed well. The town and it's people can be hurt, Rimuru can barely be defeated in combat.
The Misfit of the Demon King Academy 1st season did it as well. Manga and originally story less so. Anos Voldigoad carries the story alongside the 2 sisters who near instantly(first episode and 4th episode) acknowledge his extreme power. Anos wants a world of peace and has near omnipotent powers but the story isn't about his power, just how he shapes the world around his will with comrades/love interests/bro-mance.
Eminence in the Shadow does the OP MC by having the main character be the embodiment of players in a table RPG game ruining the Dungeonmaster's story. Shadow comedicly and constantly ignores the story and NPCs of the DM. The twist is there is a serious story being told by all the other characters. Shadow is just Haruhi Suzumiya and effectly in a completely seperate reality from everyone else.
/rant
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