The Maou Is Troubled by the Suicidal Heroine - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - The Heroine Drowns in a Poisonous Swamp

[MangaDex]

 

[JeanXXVII]

oh a new chapter i thought this was a oneshot nice

 

[eviljackspicer]

IT LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVES

 

[Le_Flemard]

@JeanXXVII
With how this chapter started, it looks like a first chapter of a serialization.
Might be the oneshot got so much fans they decided to start making a serialization or something.

 

[Nick86]

Took a year but is nice to see this serie back, thank mate. <3

 

[DarkFlame]

thank you for translating this!😊

 

[nobaka]

thanks for picking this back up

 

[abear]

@Cuervo99 No te preocupes, your English is better than many (most?) native speakers.
Just 1 thing: in the last page 'Seurat' went 'Sesurat'. Yes, names romanization is always a pain.
Thanks for picking this up!

edit: p3-1: "it's a job that will bring you great glory!" (a lot of/lots of, if it wasn't 'glory')

 

[elefantine97]

Maple be like

 

[nachtness]

what a jerk isekai god

 

[Tamerlane]

Heroine: Hey, Maou! You wanna eat me!
Demon King: No thanks Heroine!
Heroine: But I wanna die!

 

[justforthelulz]

Wondering what kind of backstory she'll have that led her to jump in the first place.

 

[kkuroro]

Haaaaa!!!! cuando te di permiso para usar mis traducciones!!!!

 

[marianolinx]

@kkuroro ? De verdad necesita permiso?

 

[Simpleton]

@Cuervo99

Well done. I thought it looked good all the way until the last page.

Things that should be changed on the last page:

Why don't you taste... -> Why don't you try... (demon king getting so scared doesn't flow as neatly from "taste")

This poison that is so terrible that could -> This poison that is so terrible that it could (you just forgot an it there)

Sesurat -> Seurat (at least that's what she was named earlier in the episode, I guess the earlies ones might have been wrong though)


Less important, can be changed or not according to taste:
Antibodies -> Immunity (applies to all antibodies in the comic, also those on earlier pages)

 

[Owyn]

I don't really get last page with the potent poison destroying castle?

 

[Kaarme]

Why would a skeletor care about poison? Maybe if it's some sort of spirit poison.

 

[DestroyedClone]

If it's a poison so dangerous it could destroy the castle, then doesn't that mean it's less like a poison and more like a cloud of acid (I'm assuming)? I don't think poison really can affect brick, but you could probably decay or deteriorate it.

 

[sylvacoer]

@Owyn - maybe it's something like a virus bomb that can chew into the carbon parts of stone?

 

[Aldis]

the isekai god should learn a bit about psychology