Dex-chan lover
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C'mon man this has been a power fantasy right from the get goAnd here is where the story start to go to shit.
Noel basically turn into a Mary Sue after this, everything he said become true, everything he did will be justified later by the author pulling shit out of his ass. As there is literally no way Noel can 6D chess the shit came out of his mouth.
edit: Also, Leon is the best character in this story, as he is the only human character after this. The other may as well be archetype with MC be author insert and have omniscient.