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Le_Dook Group Leader Joined Jan 26, 2018 Messages 412 Apr 26, 2020 #2 As first chapters go, I think this kind of failed. Rather than making the reader curious, you're made far more confused and a result I felt it much harder to get any bearings on the plot.
As first chapters go, I think this kind of failed. Rather than making the reader curious, you're made far more confused and a result I felt it much harder to get any bearings on the plot.
krispy Fed-Kun's army Joined Jun 8, 2018 Messages 786 Apr 26, 2020 #3 This was weird and the structure was unnecessary