The Otome Heroine's Fight for Survival - Vol. 4 Ch. 19.1

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For Aria's sake, please take a few seconds and run the script through a spell check. The errors are distracting me as much as the fething status screens :pout:

Which is a damn shame because the pacing in this chapter is dynamite and hot daamn girl, way to get back in the saddle there :worry::win:
do they have a proofreader? and if they do the PR must of been on break
 
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I was thinking exactly the same thing. Never trust the nice guy in a room full of assasins.
go on, the spoiler tab exists for a reason
Gai’s a hottie in the comic which I didn’t expect but if you wanna know what happens to him in the novel

Aria goes undercover as a beginner adventurer so her targets will try to sell her off as a slave, and Gai sells Aria’s targets a sleeping potion to help ‘em out and then follows them into the dungeon just to mess up her face a lil as revenge for Goth Loli Woman

but Aria knew all along and murks him

as a bonus Aria gets a makeover for her mission and becomes so cute all three of her targets get converted into lolicons and right before they get assassinated each plots to betray the other and steal Aria for himself
 
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Sorry~~ are we in the otome game or some other game?

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I’m sure there’s a Skyrim Otome mod out there lmao
 
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Interesting pose to end at.

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Troll to Aria: "Daddy, choke me harder"? XD

Agreed with the poster above, there's a fair number of very simple typos that a basic word processor spell checker would have caught, which was quite distracting. Never enough to make it entirely unintelligible what was being said, but enough to break the flow of reading because I had to stop and parse it.

Also, something that no one else has been saying so far: GOD DAMN GAI THOSE ABS! You could grate cheese on those bad boys!
 
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Gai’s a hottie in the comic which I didn’t expect but if you wanna know what happens to him in the novel

Aria goes undercover as a beginner adventurer so her targets will try to sell her off as a slave, and Gai sells Aria’s targets a sleeping potion to help ‘em out and then follows them into the dungeon just to mess up her face a lil as revenge for Goth Loli Woman

but Aria knew all along and murks him

as a bonus Aria gets a makeover for her mission and becomes so cute all three of her targets get converted into lolicons and right before they get assassinated each plots to betray the other and steal Aria for himself
I can't wait to for those chapters to be in the manga.
 
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Gai’s a hottie in the comic which I didn’t expect but if you wanna know what happens to him in the novel

Aria goes undercover as a beginner adventurer so her targets will try to sell her off as a slave, and Gai sells Aria’s targets a sleeping potion to help ‘em out and then follows them into the dungeon just to mess up her face a lil as revenge for Goth Loli Woman

but Aria knew all along and murks him

as a bonus Aria gets a makeover for her mission and becomes so cute all three of her targets get converted into lolicons and right before they get assassinated each plots to betray the other and steal Aria for himself
Haaaaaa.... What a shame, what a shame. These all seem like such interesting characters. I know people love seeing our little girl go murder-hobo on everyone, but to kill off so many neat characters? It had better do something for the plot.
 
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A very manhua interaction, almost expected to hear "You dare?! You are courting death!"
I used to read a few manhuas but between this cliche, the author "losing" items, and the power scaling making less sense than Marvel (Captain Marvel flies through 3 spaceships destroying them instantly, but needs girl power to run a glove down field and cant just.... instantly kill Thanos), i just got tired of them.

Edit: to elaborate on authors "losing" items, for those who dont know what i mean, a few manhua will have the mc find an item that theyre mysteriously drawn to, theyll find it, buy it, steal it, whatever, and put it into their bag. Hundreds of chapters later its never mentioned again, until the author writes themself into a corner and i assume goes over their work and sees this mysterious item they forgot about and it saves the day. Thats assuming it actually comes back up. I was 800 chapters into one novel and had the thought "wait..
What happened to that marble he found in the first 50 chapters."
 
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Been listening to the Light Novel, and got to this part recently;
As far as I remember, the light novel doesn't say what er role is, so I'm guessing she's an antagonist in the portion where the game's protagonist meets the dark elf and learns magic from her, several years from now. Possibly running the guild by then.

Which I guess is also what she is in this version, with a few significant alterations.
 
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Is it me or did the translation quality dropped? Typos, missing words, words that don't even make sense, etc.
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Every time I see this scanlation's group name, I chuckle and makes my day slightly better.
 

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