This is an interesting story!
Although, you might want to proof read some of the sentences/words, such as:
"Is that is the case..." would need to be changed to "If that is the case..." and others like at the beginning, when the dream boyfriend says "Your bangs are way too think," should be changed from think to thick.
Another point, which is really just a personal preference, is that when you have questions shouted, e.g "Why didn't you heart my posts!" I'd put a question mark to frame it more as a question, rather than a statement; "Why didn't you heart my posts?!"
But, thank you for translating this! It's an intriguing plot so far.