Ok, I need to rant a bit. Skip this comment if you don't wanna hear it.
I want to say first, that I do like this story.
That said, some writers need to learn that having a whole lot of things going on at once and not explaining anything doesn't make a story "intriguing" or "interesting" or anything. It only makes it confusing and tedious to read. They aren't playing to their strengths. I like the characters and the concept, but please just tell me what's going on! And everything is of course made worse because the story loops on itself with time travel (sorta? It, like everything else, is not explained)
Also, cut back the characters by like half. Most we only met once anyway, and yet you expect me to remember everything about them?