The Story of a Girl with Sanpaku Eyes

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Eh, Mr. Boyfriend's kinda flat and one dimensional and I can't say I'm too invested in their romance, considering it only took a handful of chapters to get full blown. Cute as it may be, I can not subsist on Cute alone!
 
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Holy fuck, this is so cringy. And i don't mean the idea, but the execution. This is next level of "self-insert".

Too bad though, because art and coloring are really nice.
 
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Vol 1. The Girl Perspective
Vol 2. The Boy Perspective
Vol 3. The Pure Love Squad Perspective(Maybe ?)
 
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Vol 1. The Girl Perspective
Vol 2. The Boy Perspective
Vol 3. The Pure Love Squad Perspective(Maybe ?)

Then it looks like i really misused it. Apologies.

(unless it was a joke)

edit: yeah, i really did ; didn't notice the update for volume two.
 
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I think you're either nitpicking or didn't understand what i've meant.
this is a twitter webcomic, there isn't much depth to it
but you still managed to misunderstand it?
the viewers self insert is represented by the 'pure love squad', it's kinda hard to miss that. He is literally drawing his own readers (lol).
a self insert manga is usually when you make a very generic character with no discerning personality , give him mary sue status and overhype/ overpower him for no reason
here we have a twitter webcomic about a girl blushing
I fail to even fathom how you came to the conclusion that this is a self-insert, I'm not trying to diss you, but it really boggles my noggles how you can possibly say that. On a twitter webcomic.
 
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Author says her name is Mizuno Amane (https://twitter.com/syunsuke1009/status/1001034459372601344).
 
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a self insert manga is usually when you make a very generic character with no discerning personality , give him mary sue status and overhype/ overpower him for no reason

Initial disclaimer: i've read first three chapters, got cringed, and proceeded to leave a comment.

Main stuff: yeah, no shit. It also quite often is (at least from what i've seen) an opportunity for the authors to present themselves in a better light to their readers, and-or an attempt to make them feel better about themselves, especially in amateur-ish, self published works (meta-narrative-like devices and tropes notwithstanding). In that case, i assumed the artist did exactly that by giving himself* literary version of sim girlfriend to "interact with", and by simultaneously putting himself in the story as a sort-of first perspective person narrator ("next level"). All that crumbled of course, when i've read first chapter of the second volume, where narrative point of view changes.

That's the rough sketch of thought process behind my first comment.

My guess is (reason being, the way you pointed out the significance of "love squad"), you assumed i thought that "self-insert" means the variation of "audience surrogacy".

*i also assumed gender because of the name, how wrong of me

this is a twitter webcomic, there isn't much depth to it
but you still managed to misunderstand it?
here we have a twitter webcomic about a girl blushing
I fail to even fathom how you came to the conclusion that this is a self-insert,[...] but it really boggles my noggles how you can possibly say that. On a twitter webcomic.

I'm not trying to diss you

Really now.
 

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>I like him because of his KIND FACE

You're on thin ice here manga, don't push your luck
 

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The Fluff is over limit in this one.?
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