The Story of a Scary Consignee - Ch. 5

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Please please please, author. Don't fuck this up. Most manga authors take either one of two approach with female fan characters, either their annoying, intense hyper fan or obsessive to an annoying yandere type way. For the love of God, don't follow either of these paths.
 
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Imo it's too early to introduce a new character. We're at chapter 5 and we barely established the relationship between the two starting characters, usually you want to add a new character when some progress has been done in the plot, not when we only make a step from the starting line with one foot and the other foot is still touching the line xD
 
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Brother, did you do this chapter in an hour? Holy shit. It only came out at 5:40 AM, and this was posted roughly four hours ago.
 
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Female lead reminds me of the girl from Jirai Nan desu ka? Chihara-san. Both seem to have the ability to misread a situation so much, that MC might get r**** out of blue.
 
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It took me a solid 5 minutes to figure out what was happening in the last panel
 
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or obsessive to an annoying yandere type way
I will be honest pal, LOVE (Good) yanderes, There's barely any work about commited guy X yandere out there
I cant be cheering more for that route

And God, do i hope this bloody manga is not going harem route, and is a real deal about relationship
 
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Wait... are we approaching the twist that she is actually much younger than she looks?
 

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