The Strongest Savior's Second Chance - Vol. 2 Ch. 17

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The problem with this fight is that the weight it's supposed to have doesn't match the buildup it's gotten. If you need to have a flashback in the middle of your fight in order to explain why the fight is important, then you really screwed up your pacing.
 
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If this happened IRL or something~
My mind would have straight went "Welp,MC gonna die"~
 
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MC a few chapters ago: "No, Tina, you cant fight because mages are powerful so they get targeted."
MC now: "TiNa HeLp Me, Im UsElEsS!!!"
 
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holy shit that retarded broad literally gave ZERO reason to put up that damn ice rock in between eric and the demon. what the actual fuck??
 
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FUCKING HYPED! @dobatag, he literally would've died from the Demon's fire attack, with both her magic and his swordsmanship they could take down the demon without losing a life
 
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Can't Tina be poisoned, hurt and bedridden for 4 years? The MC is dumb and boring, with the dumber single dimensional friend the shit get even more boring.
 
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Ngl, this story would have been much more interesting if it was that Grazio guy's story.
 

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