The Undetectable Strongest Job: Rule Breaker - Vol. 4 Ch. 16

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Quite a few contraction issues. (I've when it should be I have, it's when it should be it is). Feels like someone just learned contractions but not when to use them (there must be a verb or number after I've and anything at all after it's)
 
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Aw, I wish the manga have gone the WN route cause honestly it's waaaaaayyyy more interesting.
 
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Quite a few contraction issues. (I've when it should be I have, it's when it should be it is). Feels like someone just learned contractions but not when to use them (there must be a verb or number after I've and anything at all after it's)
It's just for better shaping. :worry:
 
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I love you? I have you?
I dunno why you thought it was "love" :dogkek:. But yea, it's "have".
For context, he meant he won't feel lonely basically. As in she'd be the closest person he could call his family in this isekai. (Which Lavia meant by "same situation")
 
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Thank you for the chapter! Girl is right, he IS suspicious, but there's a pretty big difference between being cautious/wary and being an asshole.
Yeap, just like popinloopy posted. She wasn't wrong to be cautious and suspicious of the MC. We don't suspect him because we been with him from the beginning. But she is also annoyingly antagonistic.
We also have to take into account that she has been into repeated encounters with assholes, a group of which tried to kill her and her party. Since the incident's still fresh, it's understandable that she's malicious to nearly every male she meets at this time, but still, that doesn't justify her to lump all the men together and treat them like trash.
 

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