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@Hitspark
" You can say I'm "theory crafting" till you're blue in the face"
"clearly implying that the setting follows some level of Medieval European rule"
Well that's literally what your doing, What you said about him not being treated properly being a threat to their reputation/ them wanting their family name to mean something or what you said about the king/ head od the church, you're just making this up.
"that the gear he was given was so bad that it was likely that whoever gave it to him was in fact trying to kill him. The story is telling us that his family legitimately took this as an opportunity to get him axed out there on the road." They could have giving him nothing at all, that would be a much more efficient way of getting the reader to feel pity for the poor beaten down(not really) MC
"The story is showing us that his family legitimately does not want him around. Period." His telling us this, the story doesn't show that all.
"He even says that he hasn't talked to his dad in 3 months, even though they live in the same house. He doesn't say he hasn't SEEN him, but that they haven't spoken. That's active avoidance." maybe his a useless neet who stays in his room all day being drain on his family.
"He has no reason to show gratitude to people who only let him live because they felt like they were forced to. The first chance they had of getting rid him without trouble, they took it. Gratitude is earned, not given. " Except for the fact that they clothed him, sheltered him and fed him his hole life up to this point , and beside why not at least teach his brother( we all know its the so MC can be special and OP)
"Honestly, the way you're talking sounds like he should be grateful they didn't snip off his genitals and throw him in a dungeon because anything less is something he should walk off and act like there were no problems." No I just think the way the MC is talking is like they did that to him, instead his wealthy just ignored him lol.
"Quite frankly, why should a victim of negligence and abuse be grateful to the abusers when the only reason they did the good things they did for him, wasn't even out of the kindness of their own hearts but to avoid trouble with the law? I just don't get the logic behind it and I don't think you could make a suitable case for it either." Because this new trope of " I was a born in a noble family but the don't like me" only makes me think the MC is just a whinny rich kid complaining about not getting enough attention, also I haven't seen this abuse you're talking about.
" You can say I'm "theory crafting" till you're blue in the face"
"clearly implying that the setting follows some level of Medieval European rule"
Well that's literally what your doing, What you said about him not being treated properly being a threat to their reputation/ them wanting their family name to mean something or what you said about the king/ head od the church, you're just making this up.
"that the gear he was given was so bad that it was likely that whoever gave it to him was in fact trying to kill him. The story is telling us that his family legitimately took this as an opportunity to get him axed out there on the road." They could have giving him nothing at all, that would be a much more efficient way of getting the reader to feel pity for the poor beaten down(not really) MC
"The story is showing us that his family legitimately does not want him around. Period." His telling us this, the story doesn't show that all.
"He even says that he hasn't talked to his dad in 3 months, even though they live in the same house. He doesn't say he hasn't SEEN him, but that they haven't spoken. That's active avoidance." maybe his a useless neet who stays in his room all day being drain on his family.
"He has no reason to show gratitude to people who only let him live because they felt like they were forced to. The first chance they had of getting rid him without trouble, they took it. Gratitude is earned, not given. " Except for the fact that they clothed him, sheltered him and fed him his hole life up to this point , and beside why not at least teach his brother( we all know its the so MC can be special and OP)
"Honestly, the way you're talking sounds like he should be grateful they didn't snip off his genitals and throw him in a dungeon because anything less is something he should walk off and act like there were no problems." No I just think the way the MC is talking is like they did that to him, instead his wealthy just ignored him lol.
"Quite frankly, why should a victim of negligence and abuse be grateful to the abusers when the only reason they did the good things they did for him, wasn't even out of the kindness of their own hearts but to avoid trouble with the law? I just don't get the logic behind it and I don't think you could make a suitable case for it either." Because this new trope of " I was a born in a noble family but the don't like me" only makes me think the MC is just a whinny rich kid complaining about not getting enough attention, also I haven't seen this abuse you're talking about.