The Urban Flower's Vacation

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I see tits, I follow for now.

Hmm the cover was a lie until now.
 
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@Gallade0475 I'm surprised you only got coronavirus. generally dumpster diving this deep also give you a little bit of aids and cancer too.
 
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Why draw a cleavage if you're going to censor it. Just wow LOL
Ch5 to 6 feels like it's missing a page
The story feels rushed and flimsy
 
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The summary itself explain how crappy this thing is :|
 
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Here we are echhi that fails at even the fundamental allow horny people to fap to good art just wow
 
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Here to save you the trouble of reading: The cover is a lie, what you feel after reading the description is what you gonna get from this...thing of a story. You may think that's impossible but it's real.

Prop to the team for translating this but it's a hard pass for even the most desperate souls looking for just about anything to read on a saturday night.
 
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@chaonightmare
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I generally try to not complain or be 'overly' negative on my comments. People like different shit, etc. And I always just try to be thankful to the people behind almost any releases.


But, dammit, I really wish I saw your comment before checking it out. I still probably would have peeked, very rarely blindly trust a comment, but I would have known sooner 🤣

Since it was short and I was still... Kinda lost, I figured I'd read through a few chapters. Still unsure at ch5, I finished what few were left since it was so quick...
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I'm sorry to those who put work into this, but god damn.
 
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I think people are rating this poorly because it's terrible clickbait for penises. Well it could also be because it's not very good.
 
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It just kind of jumps from point to point without showing the connecting stuff. Like, you know generally what goes in the missing space but the transitions are still abrupt and jarring.
 
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This was a headache to scroll through, Each "Chapter" has as much if not more filler/title/translator pages then actual content. The story jumped from one thing to another without real context.
 

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