Thank you so much for translating, you have very good flow in the dialogues. I love your group's translations!
If there's only one thing I'd like to nitpick about, it'd be the name translation of ml. Please consider changing Raffaello to Raphael as it was in the novel 😭
I don't think Raffaello Kedrey really suits the setting, it's style is too different compared to the other names of this series.