I also really like the writing for this story. I'm actually not bothered by long dialogues for this one.
Also, the mom is such a witch... Snow-White-and-Seven-Dwarves-esque. She feels the need to tell herself (all the time it seems) that she's prettier and better than her daughter. Like bish, grow up. Your face may look young but I know you too old to be playing like this. So petty.