This Chubby Girl Can't Stop Acting Impishly - Vol. 3 Ch. 18

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A brief glimpse of Mr Architect being assertive, and it was good. He's desperately lacking character development.
We don't have the usual benefit of seeing his Thought Bubbles like a normal herbivore MC but I think they're doing a good job of making him a good boyfriend. You can imagine what he's thinking by his expressions, having her outline silhouetted in his eyes was nice way to show he was captivated.

It's tough because if you showed his perspective and thoughts, all her self doubt about her weight would become dramatic irony.
 
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We don't have the usual benefit of seeing his Thought Bubbles like a normal herbivore MC but I think they're doing a good job of making him a good boyfriend. You can imagine what he's thinking by his expressions, having her outline silhouetted in his eyes was nice way to show he was captivated.

It's tough because if you showed his perspective and thoughts, all her self doubt about her weight would become dramatic irony.
That's a fair point to an extent, but a visual medium can show without telling, and dramatic irony is fun anyway.
 
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We don't have the usual benefit of seeing his Thought Bubbles like a normal herbivore MC but I think they're doing a good job of making him a good boyfriend. You can imagine what he's thinking by his expressions, having her outline silhouetted in his eyes was nice way to show he was captivated.

It's tough because if you showed his perspective and thoughts, all her self doubt about her weight would become dramatic irony.
I didn't even notice the silhouette

P.S. I have no idea who Architect is.
 
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Ngl, pg. 17 was unexpected but nice.

Think that's a joke on how Pierce Brosnan may be a feeder or chubby chaser
Who the hell is Pierce Brosnan? And why does that make him an architect??
 

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