Though I May Be a Villainess, I'll Show You I Can Obtain Happiness! - Vol. 11 Ch. 1 - The Crimson Noble Lady Has Low Self-Esteem!

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Was cute but also derp. But they are prolly still teenagers or barely 20's so I would expect them to be dumb
 
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Not terrible, but pretty basic.

Story probably would've worked better if the "Evil Heroine" character was instead an in on the plan to free the "villainess" from the marriage ally since as-is the evil heroine character feels a little under-used and arguably under explained
 
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CF Royal Guard: "Jesus Christ, this is ass. Absolute dogshit of a plan, your highness."
 
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Oh! this is the cover art's story, I was wondering when it was gonna show up because the art is pretty
 
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It is weird... since they need to finish the story in one chapter, they need to speed things up, but dome times it does not work out.. this may be one of those times
 
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I was going to ask what that childhood friend guard was even there for, but it's occurred to me that if this were a proper story, it would be far more entertaining to watch it from the outside.

See her silly villainess-practices and stretchy face massages while the prince is being an awkward doofus.

That said, this also relies on a brand of miscommunication I really hate. There's not enough to sell to me that the prince would think she dislikes him or vice versa.
 
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Nice art but meh story. Execution could done better on the prince side.
 

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