@zilocybn Thanks for your work, I know its especially hard for 1 person but this story does look interesting, so thanks again and good luck! There might be people who are critical but based on this chapter I think you're doing fine. As long as its easy to read and the main idea comes across I don't think it has to be perfect. 😊
I just know the blonde girl is going to be a pain later. I get she might not click with our MC or particularly like her, but it's annoying how she looks down on her. You can tell she doesn't think she deserves to have the guy's attention, and then goes on to make it sound like she's only responding because its a guy as if she's some flirt. On the other hand her senior seems like a nice person.