To Your Eternity - Vol. 12 Ch. 112 - Then, Towards the Sunrise

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@minecraftjennys You are mistaking what you want to happen with good writing.

If you think the revival of some of the dead characters makes their past deaths inconsequential,...
It does. Dying implies that you stay dead. If you can be magically revived then it is inconsequential. Death does not have the consequences it once had in your story anymore, and the more you abuse this plot device, the less important death becomes in your work. At some point it holds no significance whatsoever. Ask yourself a question - how is death different, compared to someone simply being away with no way to contact them, if you know said person will come back after X amount of time?

After over a 100 chapters, Fushi is finally being reunited with close friends who shaped the person he is today. People who were all taken unfairly too early from him because of Knockers.
Life is unfair. Just because you want to see a "fair" resolution, doesn't mean that it is less inconsequential. The author decided to sacrifice the significance of the notion of death in order to avoid further tragedy.

None of the above has changed. And even if every single character was revived, it would not make their death any less consequential. They still suffered, Fushi still suffered.
If you are still not convinced after reading my points above, then look up the meaning of inconsequential. The fact that they have suffered doesn't change this: when you revive characters you take away from the significance of death. Readers stop caring if you kill characters, since those could potentially be revived - the tension is gone.

It's just now, after all that suffering, we're finally seeing the end of the tunnel. Its finally the dawn to a long, drawn out and restless night.
Happy endings do not objectively make a work better. You are free to like them - this doesn't mean that this justifies ruining important elements of the story to achieve them. The goal does not justify the means.
 
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@criver The only thing I'm doing is not dictating how death should be handled in a story and which handling of it makes a story "good".

I never said this was good writing. I just tried explaining why I think, in my personal opinion, the characters coming back from death in this specific story is not bad. How the author handles the future of this story is up in the air. It could be a train wreak, it could end with the same heart rending emotions the author brought about in chapter one.

I've read your different answers to my different points and in response I raise you this: Why does death, as a plot device, need to be the ultimate consequence? Why should it have the same impact throughout the story?

At this point every human character to grow close to Fushi has died. Its predictable at this point. Would you not argue that such a simple pattern of friendship = death in Fushi's entourage has cheapened it already? Is death really that impactful if its predictable? At that point what does reviving them change?

when you revive characters you take away from the significance of death

I'm not going to argue against this. If death is reversible, then its a given that death is no longer the ultimate tragic plot device available for the author to use to twist the reader's emotions. However, that doesn't necessarily mean the effect of all of the previous characters death is negated. As I've said before, it doesn't mean Gugu that got brought back that his death should be considered inconsequential. I doubt his brother, that beer gramps, pioran and especially Rynn and Fushi would think so.

Life is unfair. Just because you want to see a "fair" resolution, doesn't mean that it is less inconsequential. The author decided to sacrifice the significance of the notion of death in order to avoid further tragedy.

The great thing about fiction is that it doesn't need to parallel life 1:1. Character's coming back isn't so much as just "fair" as its almost a verbatim follow through of the hero's journey. It's the "second threshold" so to speak, the point of Ordeal, Death and Rebirth. You also say the author sacrificed the notion of death in order to avoid further tragedy, but unless you have the manuscript to the next chapters I'd say thats quite presumptive. Whose to say this is permanent? Whose to say a knocker doesn't with the ability to kill and steal the revived characters away permanently? The knockers are said to "Knock on the doors of paradise, seeking its destruction", their goal is to kill everyone. Whose to say the very souls of our favourite character's art at risk? We know very little about the workings of the after-life. So far its possible to guess that spirits with enough will power can stay behind, but what of those that don't?

We've seen glimpses of interesting "ideal worlds" build around our various character's dreams following their death (which they eventually turn away to stay with Fushi). You could say that leaving the characters dead, with the knowledge they get to enjoy this perfect afterlife is just as cheap as reviving them in flesh. Except you can't because the people left behind still suffer.

The fact that they have suffered doesn't change this: when you revive characters you take away from the significance of death. Readers stop caring if you kill characters, since those could potentially be revived - the tension is gone.

I've looked up the definition of "inconsequential" and low and behold, its not changed since I first learned the definition of the word back when spelling tests were still a thing in my life. You seem strangely dismissive of the character's experiences in this story considering this is very much a character driven story. The death of all these characters drove the story forward in some way shape or form. Reviving them after the fact doesn't suddenly revert the different paths Fushi took on his journey as a consequence of the people he's met. That time where Fushi isolated himself from the rest of humanity for a few decades would not have happened in a vacuum. It happened as a direct result of so many people, he'd personally known dying due to the knocker attack. Many of these people are not following Fushi around in the after life, nor have they been revived. Even for those he's revived, he'll probably feel guilt over their deaths and how he ruined their lives no matter how many times he can bring them back.

Readers stop caring if you kill characters, since those could potentially be revived - the tension is gone.

Many stories do just fine in bringing about reader interest without characters dying. While the story has used character deaths for emotional impact in the past, it does not necessarily mean the author needs to continually rely on this device indefinitely.

You are free to like them - this doesn't mean that this justifies ruining important elements of the story to achieve them. The goal does not justify the means.

I personally don't understand is why you think its an important element to this story for characters to permanently stay dead. Its been obvious since chapter 11 that a character's "death" is far from the end, so why does the idea of these characters regaining a physical body suddenly make their death inconsequential?

While there are a few different definitions for it, theres often a denotation of "end":
the destruction or permanent end of something

Based on this definition, death in this series has never really been much of a death really.

TLDR:
Revival of dead characters is neither good nor bad, it just depends on how its handled. In addition, ever since March, characters have never really "died" - considering they were often shown as spirits following after Fushi. And so we can't judge until we see how the author handles subsequent deaths (if there are any actual ones) and revivals after this. We'll have to wait.
 
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@criver Im just saying it was expected from the start. Why complain about it when everyone here knew it would end up happening sooner or later for the progression of the plot.
 
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@thegoatrider Do you avoid criticizing stuff because you expected it to be bad? For one thing I was hoping it would never happen.

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Why does death, as a plot device, need to be the ultimate consequence? Why should it have the same impact throughout the story?
Death does not need to be "the ultimate consequence", as long as you do not kill your characters. It may sound tautological, but death is the consequence of dying - it's not about what it needs to be, it's about what it is. It is very simple - if the author does not want dead characters - they should not kill them. Killing a character, making the reader believe that they are dead for good, and then introducing new rules to the game is a cheap trick for artificial drama and artificial perceived depth. There are better ways to do this without having to change the rules (or introduce new rules) and ruining a perfectly good story. Needless to say, this is not about its impact throughout the story - the impact is a by-product of the above.

At this point every human character to grow close to Fushi has died. Its predictable at this point. Would you not argue that such a simple pattern of friendship = death in Fushi's entourage has cheapened it already?
Because the author did that. Is it cheap? Sure. That, however, does not mean that you will rectify it through another cheap trick. You do not fix previous mistakes by stacking more on top.

Is death really that impactful if its predictable? At that point what does reviving them change?
It changes a lot, specifically how the story reads. From this point on, it is to be expected that the author can do whatever they want concerning life and death - which is a pretty important theme in the manga. Furthermore, it makes previous events seem cheap and inconsequential in hindsight.

If death is reversible, then its a given that death is no longer the ultimate tragic plot device available for the author to use to twist the reader's emotions.
This is not about death being the ultimate tragic plot device - in general death shouldn't be only this in any work with a pretense for depth and ambitions to tackle more serious problems - particularly in such a story where death is a major theme. Unfortunately, with the revival fiasco the author reduced it to this - a cheap plot device for tragedy and drama.


As I've said before, it doesn't mean Gugu that got brought back that his death should be considered inconsequential.
It's objectively inconsequential, it's irrelevant what one believes it should be considered as.

The great thing about fiction is that it doesn't need to parallel life 1:1.
I definitely agree. However consistency and causality should not be taken lightly either, as otherwise you end up with inconsistent and mediocre works.

Character's coming back isn't so much as just "fair" as its almost a verbatim follow through of the hero's journey. It's the "second threshold" so to speak, the point of Ordeal, Death and Rebirth.
I disagree, it seems like you took death and rebirth too literally. It's important to note that we're not talking about the hero's rebirth, we're talking about the author reviving characters that he already got an emotional payoff from by killing. You can't have your cake and eat it too. Otherwise you go into garbage isekai land - where everything is possible as long as it fulfills the wishes of the lowest common denominator - regardless of whether it is consistent, and regardless of the effects on the quality of the story.

You also say the author sacrificed the notion of death in order to avoid further tragedy, but unless you have the manuscript to the next chapters I'd say thats quite presumptive.
"Further tragedy" was mostly in the sense of the tragedy our MC would have gotten hit with, if there was no balancing factor (the ghosts + revival) to give him hope to continue on. Though I do not doubt that such a cheap trick could be reused in the future to avoid tragedy.

Whose to say this is permanent?
Nobody. But the doubt is already there. You will know, that the author can always weasel out of a situation that they have cornered themselves in, with such a bs development.

So far its possible to guess that spirits with enough will power can stay behind, but what of those that don't?
If he actually revived everyone, killed off the knockers, and ended it with everyone lived happily ever after - effectively destroying all the themes that were built up - I would have dropped it on the spot and given it a <5 score. Destroying what you have built over a hundred chapters is simply insulting to the intelligence of your readers.

You could say that leaving the characters dead, with the knowledge they get to enjoy this perfect afterlife is just as cheap as reviving them in flesh. Except you can't because the people left behind still suffer.
I am ok with that. However, it is not ok when you start reviving dead characters, whose deaths you have used in a meaningful manner already, in order to avoid tragedy.

The death of all these characters drove the story forward in some way shape or form.
That's the point - the story was built on the premise that the characters died - their death was used to achieve various goals. And then... the author decided to undo all of that work.

Reviving them after the fact doesn't suddenly revert the different paths Fushi took on his journey as a consequence of the people he's met.
It does not. And the point never was that it changes what paths Fushi took. What it changes is the meaning and value of their deaths, the understanding and theme of death throughout the story, and the seriousness in which various problems were tackled.

While the story has used character deaths for emotional impact in the past, it does not necessarily mean the author needs to continually rely on this device indefinitely.
This is a problem I already addressed in one of the points above - death should not be just a cheap tool for "emotional impact", at least not in a story that clearly has a pretense for something more.

I personally don't understand is why you think its an important element to this story for characters to permanently stay dead.
For the same reason one wants consistency and causality to hold in stories - otherwise you end up with bs isekai level writing.

Its been obvious since chapter 11 that a character's "death" is far from the end, so why does the idea of these characters regaining a physical body suddenly make their death inconsequential?
Because death had meaning and certain implications before the author decided to throw those in the garbage.

Based on this definition, death in this series has never really been much of a death really.
The death of the characters was perceived as actual death at least by Fushi - and to some extent by readers.
 
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Nice to see them alive again. I just hope they don't die for again. 😁
 
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@criver the entire plot is base on death, we've known since early chapters that the spirits don't move on when fuushi is in contact with them. Then we later found out that he can revive dead friends. the Plto is based around an immortal being with godlike powers. you have very little room to criticize the plot as since him being godlike he should be capable of reviving the dead.
Not sure why you type that composition doubt anyone here thinks your opinions matter that much and would make them read the entire thing.
 
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Unfortunately for you, "Didn't read lol" is not an argument. Neither is "premise is based on X, so bad writing is ok".
 
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Them being rezzed takes away the tension... cuz there ain't supposed to be none right now, fam. This is relief after a deluge of grim chapters. Now you're supposed to wonder "what's next?" and sure you could assume there's no threat to anything anymore, but I don't see why you would. Right now, I'll be glad if everything goes smoothly forever after all that misery, but who knows. I mean, I like fictional misery, but I also want March to grow up,,,,,,,,
 
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@criver No i'm literally telling you, that people in general don't think you're important enough to read that long of a rant...
Shorten your shit be more concise. Also why are you here if you dislike the story/ plot?
 
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No i'm literally telling you, that people in general don't think you're important enough to read that long of a rant...
Shorten your shit be more concise.
It actually works the other way around. If you're arrogant enough (aka you believe you're "important enough") and disagree with someone,
you don't really go and address their points in depth (like I did for minecraftjennys) - you just tell them they're wrong and that's it. Or if you do not dare challenge their points openly,
you resort to childish retorts. For instance you type something like this:

Not sure why you type that composition doubt anyone here thinks your opinions matter that much

Also why are you here if you dislike the story/ plot?
It's a funny thing - being able to dislike some elements of a story, and being able to like others - truly fascinating.
 
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@criver my last reply.

Yea the element you dislike is one of the core plot points in the manga.
Honestly idc m8, you always post some neg comment on alot of mangas here.
 
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Honestly idc m8, you always post some neg comment on alot of mangas here.
Your point? Were any of my "neg comments" unwarranted? Am I supposed to celebrate mediocrity? I would say no. So I do not see the problem with this. Or is the fact, that the comment section is not an echo chamber, what actually bothers you? This seems to have been the case in numerous similar discussions. I am sorry to disappoint you, but the purpose of a comment section is not to serve as a circlejerk.

Manga in general have mediocre writing, hence the occasional criticism. Someone has to balance out the constant praise of all kinds of bad writing practices.

It's supply and demand - the lower the readers' standards, the lower the quality of writing will be - as evidenced by the isekai genre. The sooner and more people learn to quantify objectively the quality of writing, the better.
 
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@criver You sentiments about this revival ability aren’t completely unreasonable, but it’s not as though you couldn’t see this a while ago. In fact, the problems with reviving the dead is part of why Fushi wasn’t told about it earlier. The problems with constantly reviving people to the point of the revived trivializing their own demise to the point of destruction of their personal relationships and sense of their own mortality was the point of the trio during this battle. If you weren’t soured on the concept of revival prior to this point, why complain about reviving memorable characters now even though you knew it’d happen eventually? Personally, I wouldn’t say it’s either good or bad right now; I’m waiting to see what the author does with it going forward before deciding whether this story was well written or garbage.
 
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@Loksel I am unsure why people get stuck on:
it’s not as though you couldn’t see this a while ago.
It's irrelevant to the end result. I am not pointing out that this was not foreshadowed, I am pointing out that reviving everyone the author wants to, is a stupid maneuver, that panders to the readers' wants by sacrificing the story's needs. It's a development I would expect from a low-tier isekai story, not from this work (or at least I hoped that it will not come to this), clearly I was wrong in that regard.

If you weren’t soured on the concept of revival prior to this point, why complain about reviving memorable characters now even though you knew it’d happen eventually?
Because I can excuse the revival of the three warriors, since: 1) they are not that close to Fushi, 2) their revival has a purpose - demonstrating how "cheap" and meaningless life and death becomes when you can revive at the flick of a wrist, 3) the author didn't use their deaths as extensively for an emotional payoff. On the other hand, when the author revives every character they want to (or who the readers want to), this becomes problematic - in hindsight it turns out that the death of these characters was simply used to generate cheap artificial drama. This basically destroys anything that was achieved with (2). The important point was the importance that those revivals hold for Fushi.
 

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