Toki-sensei wa Kigaetai - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Sailor Uniform

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Might be a translation preference, but I'm pretty sure Mira's name should be translated as "Mila." Her full name is written in Katakana and she's supposed to be a foreign English teacher, which is why she also has Summer as a name.
 
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Might be a translation preference, but I'm pretty sure Mira's name should be translated as "Mila." Her full name is written in Katakana and she's supposed to be a foreign English teacher, which is why she also has Summer as a name.
Both names exist, both Mira and Mila are predominantly slavic names, though Mira might also be a diminutive for Miranda, so it could be Miranda Summer
 
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This manga confuses me, sometimes Tokiko imagine things, other time those events actually happen. Where Tokiko and Summer found by the other school members? Did they actually flash their panties? I can't tell.
 
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I will not comment on the translation itself, but what was happening with that typesetting? I don’t think I’ve ever seen so many instances of single punctuation on a line of its own. Also, splitting words without hyphens makes it awful to read. You can make the text smaller to fit bubbles, and if for some reason you can’t, at least add a stroke to the text so it doesn’t blend into the edge of the bubble.

I just noticed on the NSFW pages (which you can upload on Mangadex) that you are asking people to join your Patreon. You need to put a lot more work into your editing before you should even consider asking for money (which, in principle, I am against).
 
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LEGENDARY typesetting I have never seen such care afforded for a translation

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Does anyone know where to read the raw version i want to read chapther 5 and 6
 
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I'm going to wait for the other group's translation, the cleaning/typesetting issues with this one in combination with the author's frenetic style are making for a difficult read.

And is that parenthetical on page 2 actually in the text or a TN note? If the latter, it should be kept out of the bubble.
 
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oh he is back with the advertising his nsfw stuff, and the awful translation and typesetting
 
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This manga confuses me, sometimes Tokiko imagine things, other time those events actually happen. Where Tokiko and Summer found by the other school members? Did they actually flash their panties? I can't tell.
nah you can see the thought bubbles on the page, every time she gets “caught” or whatever it’s just her fantasies
 

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