"Touto sugite Yomenaaaaaaai!!" 4P Short Stories - Vol. 1 Ch. 11 - Household of Two [By tunral]

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reversed dates? it went from 15 to 13, and even called 15th aug yesterday, on 14th aug. XD
 
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That very last page with the small square and "I'm here." That did it for me qq
 
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The reverse progression was a great twist, this chapter doesn't fit with the rest but I think it might be the best one
 
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Not the kind of "hard to read" I signed up for. This really feels out of place.
 
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@AnimeCruizer On the 14th, "yesterday" would be the 13th, which is when she first appeared, as seen on the subsequent page. The story steps backward through the days.
 
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Wait, she was standing in middle of the street so the driver must have seen her, but didn't slow down. Am i missing something? Why didn't he slow down when a person is in the middle of the street? is not like she suddenly appear there.
 

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