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Get ready for acting Head Medic Touri
Eh, Sabbatians are definitely tsarist Russia, with some weird Polish and Finnish influence (Kamakiri's name and Vanya, respectively).Again appreciate the translator, and I'm only writing this out to point out mistakes and concerns to be helpful and hope for future correction.
They are retreating to Marshdale not Mashdale. It's a pretty BIG deal to get the name of the city they are retreating too incorrect, especially when it's in the TITLE of one of the Light Novels. How? Simple typo, or another word invention.
Clothes are being ripped off. "Kill" is not the correct word for this panel. You either intentionally censored or missed the context of what actually should've been written. All I'm saying is- an A.I bot landed this no problem. Concerning.
- Old concerns -
Once again, I can tolerate Ostin instead of the authors intended Austin naming, but not Svat and the 'Motherland' russian theme for Sabbatian's. They are not Russian.
Back in Chapter 17, you had Rodri call Grey 'The Guy' which was an emotional disconnect from what was actually happening on the pages. ie. Grey mattered to Rodri, and he wouldn't call him 'The Guy' on his final stand / moments. It was disappointing.
Got a pic of the bots' results alogside the original raw?Again appreciate the translator, and I'm only writing this out to point out mistakes and concerns to be helpful and hope for future correction.
They are retreating to Marshdale not Mashdale. It's a pretty BIG deal to get the name of the city they are retreating too incorrect, especially when it's in the TITLE of one of the Light Novels. How? Simple typo, or another word invention.
Clothes are being ripped off. "Kill" is not the correct word for this panel. You either intentionally censored or missed the context of what actually should've been written. All I'm saying is- an A.I bot landed this no problem. :C
Edit: Deleted old concerns to focus on the current chapter. Cross fingers for future corrections. Thank you for your efforts.
Looks like the team updated the page to correct the translation. Kill was replaced with "Violate," which is much more acceptable for the panel. >:3Got a pic of the bots' results alogside the original raw?
You're lucky they each got their own scene. The could have just shown a grenade bouncing then exploding and not even gotten bodies.Yea sure just kill off three characters like that I don't care at all![]()
It's only gonna get betterFuck, i was just reading the web novel, and damn. I think it's the best one I've read, insane how good it is, especially arc 5 and 6