Kinda wish a word other than break was used
Break always gives me a sour taste when reading because It seems excessive
Hi, 崩れる and 乱す are the two words that I had the most trouble trying to translate. I understand the sentiment that break may come off way too strong, but I felt like it was way better than the alternatives like collapse, fall apart, crumble, etc. Unfortunately lighter words like "crack" is just an error so I had to throw that one out as well.
Also (this is my own thoughts) I feel like it does need to come off strong, Rikuto is married to the final boss of perfect and he's taken on the challenge of trying to disrupt/disturb that perfectness. He's gotta come off as equally "intimidating" compared to that as well (if I'm even making any sense).
However I could be wrong in all this, and I'm open to suggestions