Tsuredure Children - Vol. 12 Ch. 205 - Love is Unsightly (Enomoto/Motoyama)

[ices]

BROTOYAAAAAAAAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

 

[Nogoodnms]

BROTOYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

 

[Psychronia]

BROTOYAAAAAMAAAAAA!!!

Why!? This hits so close to home I felt a little actual pain, and it's rushed, and there's an uncomfortable "would this really work out" feeling.

So why did that last page still rope me in like a sucker!? GUWAAAAAH!

 

[UzukiP]

I feel super happy for Brotoyama but this chapter felt lacking. Like Tcof said, it feels like he was just her plan B. Hopefully the author addresses this in future chapters.

 

[Neuralhub]

JUSTICE
JUSTICE FOR MOTOYAMA
MY HEART IS NOW AT PEACE

 

[cheeseburger]

Justice for Brotoyama, although i feels it is too rushed

oh well

 

[Archomp]

The chapter everyone has been waiting for.
Everyone- as in every bros otaku who self insert as him- as in everyone in the comment section rite now.

 

[ivv]

*Jumps up and down*

 

[TomKeizer]

 

[Monky]

Motoyama was a great wingman and a bro. His own arc turned him into a badly written and unlikeable whiner. And that girl was beyond badly characterized, she didn't even feel human.
At least it's over.

 

[Minkulus]

Super rushed. I'm not unhappy for him, but I think that a different development would've been better. Like, maybe she was lying about having a boyfriend back home because she wanted to create some space between them, but realized she liked him as they hung out or something like that, so she invited him to wait on a boy that doesn't exist and then they could sort things out from there.

 

[anki09]

 

[BlackGeneral]

He deserved better than this rushed end.

 

[Lex79]

I'm happy for Motoyama and so I'll gloss over how rushed and badly written is this chapter.

 

[Asingh89]

Agree with all of the other comments, this chapter developments were rushed and brotoyama deserves better. Too many unanswered questions. We need another chapter for these 2 right away

 

[anf]

"Love is unsightly"

The chapter title says it all. No contrived reasons, no fake outs, just two people who got close to each other without fully understanding what they were doing. I feel like this was the only good end for them that would be any kind of realistic. Maybe Enomoto knew that Motoyama had feelings for her and maybe she didn't. It really doesn't matter. The fact remains that when she needed someone to be there for her he was and when he finally confessed his feelings she reciprocated.

Motoyama got exactly what he wanted so I'm not sure why anyone would feel bad for him. How can you do better than the person you are madly in love with?

 

[B4ND]

It may be rushed, but the best boy doesn't end up forever alone. So that's good

 

[bhagad]

This ending felt way too rushed. I feel like ending it at the previous chapter would have been better in terms of story quality, even if it was heartbreaking. But I'm glad to get this closure chapter because it means Motoyama's happy ending is canon. So in my heart, I'm just going to rewrite the ending into something more satisfying. :')

 

[Hikokujaku]

Gimme the dislike guys but this is what they call NeToRi

 

[ALacie]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH
YES
YES
THANK YOU
YOU DESERVE THE WORLD MOTOYAMA BEST BRO BEST BOY BEST BROTOYAMAN
CONGRATULATIONS I AM SO PROUD