Tsuzura-senpai wa Motokano dakara - Ch. 4 - My Ex and Her Hairstyle

[Talilover]

Using my powers as an empath to deduce this is just going to be another "nothing ever fucking happens" romcom and dropping, have fun yall

 

[draxdeveloper]

We need an explanation of how things ended, and we need it soon.

 

[weguccino]

i need bro to chiiillll just a bit lol

 

[EnFiveFour]

It'd be nice if it wasn't the same script copied across 4 chapters, if nothing else.
You could interchange his internal narrative between each chapter released and it wouldn't actually change anything, which is a touch repetitive and lazy in terms of the writing.

And if he's a "normal high school kid", then what does that make the senpai? Should she be getting flak instead, if he's acting as totally expected and not at all worthy of criticism?

Sorry if I sounded cranky. Anything can be criticised and I'm no one to tell otherwise. It pisses me off (and that's another matter) that lately there are more and more people making noise and whining for logical or plausible things in the narrative or characters even in the first chapter, without even letting the author any space to develop it.
I think the author is establishing that this kind of teasing is one of the constants we'll find in this work. Could it be done differentely? Sure. Could it be better? Also sure. But I don't think is a bad thing. It's like a first "mini arc" centered in attacking the MC with a full barrage of teasing. Just my opinion, of course.
I always read your comments and usually agree with you.

 

[NotATaxiDriver]

Sorry if I sounded cranky. Anything can be criticised and I'm no one to tell otherwise. It pisses me off (and that's another matter) that lately there are more and more people making noise and whining for logical or plausible things in the narrative or characters even in the first chapter, without even letting the author any space to develop it.
I think the author is establishing that this kind of teasing is one of the constants we'll find in this work. Could it be done differentely? Sure. Could it be better? Also sure. But I don't think is a bad thing. It's like a first "mini arc" centered in attacking the MC with a full barrage of teasing. Just my opinion, of course.
I always read your comments and usually agree with you.

Of course people would complain.

These kind of manga are dime a dozen and most of them are stretched out to all hell only to end up axed without any developments whatsoever, can you really blame the readers when their patience have been often hammered down by it?

 

[Solrikt]

Of course people would complain.

These kind of manga are dime a dozen and most of them are stretched out to all hell only to end up axed without any developments whatsoever, can you really blame the readers when their patience have been often hammered down by it?

Couldn’t have said it better myself. The genre is saturated with titles that have these annoying, drawn out tropes that lead to frustration and overall poor reading experience. That’s why titles that stray from this get so much love.

Based on the first 4 chapters of this series so far, it just feels like another run of the mill frustration story with a “she’s my ex from middle school” wrapper on it. This could have so much potential and you can have character growth without having to start the MC off with these…. Insanely annoying traits. After the first chapter, he could have been like “you know what, I still love her, let me improve myself and win her back” that would be such a better story. But whatever, I’m not the author nor do I have the skills to write my own story. Sorry for the rant

 

[Georgesmorge]

Yall gotta relax

 

[DerpyVenom]

getting back with an ex is crazy, who the hell would do that? (i did)

 

[Lazybrokeweeb]

Please make her ended with someone else rather than MC

Sorry buddy but he is the mc not u

 

[AnimuVsMango]

Twin tail supremacy

I'm assuming one of the other things that changed about her is that her tits got bigger?

With this kind of chemistry, why did they break up in the first place?

 

[ChancedPotato]

god I love seeing retards spazzing out over imaginary issues and pretending like they're actually fans of a genre and not just larpers who wants every single story to be another fucking subversion of a subversion of a mother fucking subversion again