Under Observation: My First Loves and I

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Good art, but horrible pacing.

A alternative title should be "Flasback story : My first loves and I".
All of this story happen only on a short time, so you have TONS OF FLASHBACK in each chapter to develop the girls...
And sometime, it can be ridiculous, or just extremely annoying when a sex-scene is cut several times by flashback.

Again, another H-Manhwa with only the art as the saving point, everything else is so-so.
 
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I recently read it in other site bcz it's not available here for license reason. Even though opinions differs but for me i liked this and I'm happy with Girl paired with MC in last. Even though its hard to find someone you love whats harder is finding one loves you unrequitedly.
 
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The ending was kinda unsatisfying but like the ended the girl I was wanting to.
 
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It really takes me back, one of the better ero manhwa out there. A shame the english ver is not available here
 
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At least it was a harem end. Too many emotional rollercoasters in this story, but it was a wonderful read from start to finish.
 
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This has no right to be as good as it is. I saw this pornhwa on instagram the other day so I gave it a read and boy was I surprised. It has proper story, characters, and there aren't too many chapters. Highly recommend.
 
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Awful. Let me explain. How about putting a flashback cutting out any and all H scenes? Well, it seems like the author couldn't decide whether to satisfy the reader or the story, but the point is that there would be countless opportunities to put flashbacks in other time, maybe AFTER they have sex finished. After that, how about putting a final boss as a psychopath girl (in a final H-scene that is anything but exciting, by the way), who, believe it or not, committed countless crimes and still ends up with the protagonist? I'm crying over the waste of time it was to read this.
 

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