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Yeah that makes sense. I'll be honest, I was the least confident in pages 25-26. I think my brain was skipping over the 〜させる part of the verbs... I was kind of rushing to get this done today since I knew I won't really have time the rest of the week to focus on translating. Honestly though, it could also just be my brain violently shipping these two and manifesting what I want to see onto the characters, who knows.Thanks for the upload, especially so quickly, appreciate the work!
Just a note though. I read the chapter's raws but it's been a while so I had to go back and check. On page 26, I'm not sure the translation for Misa's inner thoughts is quite accurate. Keeping it pretty literal, what I gathered is that she's thinking something along the lines of: "I'll make you experience (it), and remember (it), like a dog being trained/tamed." I'm not perfectly fluent myself, I know just enough to get by, and I'm no translator whatsoever, so please disregard this if I'm completely off the mark, but if I'm not, it does give off a pretty different impression as your TL makes it sound like Misa's busy envisioning a 'proper' committed relationship with Io, which would've kinda come out of nowhere, at least at this point. In this specific scene, the idea I got was just that she was really getting more and more into the mood.
Anyway, sorry if this comes off as nit-picky, it just got me wondering.
In any case, I was thinking about re-uploading this chapter anyway because there were a few formatting errors that I fixed but forgot to export, so I'll probably rework the TL on those pages when I do that. Many apologies for letting everyone down like that