The first ~20-30 chapters were just cute couple stuff that was fun to follow. By chapter 50, the story basically turned into the author’s barely disguised fetish (“omg ML’s member is growing larger and larger every time we do it!!!” Or “omg we did it rough and it was so good!!!” Or “omg he’s so hot and shit!!!” And more). It got very awkward and I skipped like 2 chapters in a row every 5-10 chapters.
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Cool and interesting characters were introduced partway that had interesting possible motives. The blonde guy from the academy, the white haired girl, the prince… (I don’t remember nor care about their names, since the author didn’t either).
The blonde guy was just a deus ex machina, he disappeared as soon as he outlived his usefulness.
The white haired girl had the hots for the main character, which could play bice with the ML’s obsession. This was even alluded to a bunch. Nope, she also disappears after the monster subjugation plotline.
The only other character that matters was the prince. At least we see more of him and see him get some nuance. He’s this tragic character that felt he had to do evil to protect them from his father. Wow, so cool! Very interesting! Does he overcome this and put his life on track? No! He deserves eternal unhappiness now!
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The messaging of the manga is also dogshit. What, you did some bad thing as a child because you were scared of physical (alluded) torture? You deserve eternal hatred and are beyond forgiveness. Your sins as a child cannot be forgiven, fuck you.
Like at least show that people can be redeemed and move on. The prince can atone for his sins and get some closure too.
Oh but the ML deserves no trauma for what he caused to others. His actions as a child was entirely out of his control and he deserves no responsibility. Probably because he’s hot.
Fuck you
Yes I’m mad. People deserve to be forgiven, you don’t get to play high and mighty while writing a fetish novel.
P.S. if anyone rebuts my critique with “dude chill it’s just a drawing,” I don’t care. If someone puts out their thoughts and morals onto the internet they should expect to get critiqued. Also I needed to blow off some steam after reading this in 2 days, my annoyance has been building since chapter 40.