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Man this author is terrible but I already set that expectation for him the moment he let the mc "randomize" his character in chapter 1. At this point I'm just here for the art, and only very occasionally will I actually read the text
 
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I spoiled myself by reading the raw and boi the MC is still shite
He does a spotlight but only to get rawdog again lol smh
 
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And i say this as a WN reader. Story derailed to complete HELL with major world powers already acting out way out of line. in the background His stupidity and ignorance is shown as such in the WN after this retard once again finds himself in the middle of a major event that didn't exist in the game (talking about the holy empire attach of the skyscrapper). Not much going on here though considering how different the plot has been going with character focus. (aka Kaoru)
It's basically the same, Souta did say a lot of minor character would die during the party the fact is that he ends up having to interfere and be the hero because he's being forced by his sister and the other heroines. He said it himself they would not like if he turns tail and run just because he wanted to keep the plot. He's now going to defuse the bomb and completely thwart their plans. So he ends up kinda being the saving everyone from the shadows, and it's his theme so far.
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I guess reading or watching something with intention to have something to hate on is popular, I don't know why :dogkek:
Please give me smooth-sailing, wise-juvenile, wish-fulfilment OP MC manga which I can relate to for the xth time :meguuusad:
I need releas-:slap:
 
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Motherfucking author has repeated this exact same sequence of events like 20000000 times already. I DON'T GIVE A FUCK ABOUT THE BORINGASS CLASSMATES GETTING THEIR ASSES CLAPPED BY EVIL NOBLES WHILE THE GENERIC SHOUNEN MC GUY DOES HIS GENERIC SHOUNEN MC SHIT.

Can someone spoil me if the rest of the story keeps overfocusing on them? Because if so, I'm out.
the problem that this shit is worse than light novel. manga not only come out slower but also drag allow with extra bit form pov of classmate.
like when i read LN it just so and so, but manga keep dragging this shit out while keep the pace of MC inaction the same.
 
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damn it!!! How dare other players ruin the main character's plan of not changing the story!!!!
 
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Man this author is terrible but I already set that expectation for him the moment he let the mc "randomize" his character in chapter 1. At this point I'm just here for the art, and only very occasionally will I actually read the text
There was nothing wrong with the randomization moment though. Dude just wanted to jump into playing the game asap, plenty of people do that, especially when they, like he did, figure they can just alter the parts they don't like after the fact. I do it sometimes to since it's easier than having to customize EVERYTHING about the character you're playing as. Spending hours customizing your character just isn't as important to a lot of gamers, especially in something like VR where the only people looking at you are other players (outside of being in front of a mirror,) and it matters even less when you start wearing armor (especially for the players that prioritize equipment stats over appearance.)
 
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There was nothing wrong with the randomization moment though. Dude just wanted to jump into playing the game asap, plenty of people do that, especially when they, like he did, figure they can just alter the parts they don't like after the fact. I do it sometimes to since it's easier than having to customize EVERYTHING about the character you're playing as. Spending hours customizing your character just isn't as important to a lot of gamers, especially in something like VR where the only people looking at you are other players (outside of being in front of a mirror,) and it matters even less when you start wearing armor (especially for the players that prioritize equipment stats over appearance.)
Man do what you like I simply disagree
 
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I'm just saying, gamers do do that kind of thing, so it's not really an indication of bad storytelling
Look I won't deny it doesn't happen but you're definitely in the minority if you do. And this dude was an already established tryhard that loved min maxing and being the best, yet he does something completely out of character as a badly written plot device to force him into this fat background character. At that point the author would have been better off writing it in such a way where the system forced the background character on to him. And that's only a small issue compared to the other poorly made decisions with this story.
 
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Look I won't deny it doesn't happen but you're definitely in the minority if you do. And this dude was an already established tryhard that loved min maxing and being the best, yet he does something completely out of character as a badly written plot device to force him into this fat background character. At that point the author would have been better off writing it in such a way where the system forced the background character on to him. And that's only a small issue compared to the other poorly made decisions with this story.
That's laughable that you think I'm the minority. Also, it's pretty clear the only customization he was going to be allowed to do in the beginning was his appearance, which isn't a huge concern for min-maxers who will very much wear the goofiest equipment if it means getting the best stats and abilities. He very specifically noted that he didn't care what he looked like, he just wanted to get into the game asap and would adjust things to his liking later. That's a pretty common mentality for many players that are excited about a game. If your appearance normally doesn't affect gameplay (which it obviously didn't before the game became real,) then why bother doing some in depth customization of your looks?

Even if we do go off of the idea that he randomized his stats too, the MC was only a tryhard in the sense that he liked having the freedom to do whatever he wanted, hence his mentioning of his whole PKer phase, he's the type of player that loves experimenting with the game and pushing it to its limits, which is how he got to be the best, you don't get that way by common minmaxing, you get that way by taking calculated risks, like randomizing your build to force yourself to try something different, to see if something that seems sub-optimal, and therefore rather unexplored, can actually lead to some new possibilities, especially since the game has all sort of hidden classes and abilities baked into its premise.

Look, I'm not saying the writing in this series is great, there are some pretty glaring flaws in how the "let's keep the game's story on track" logic is applied (among other issues,) but the randomization choice most definitely wasn't one of them, and acting like it is is just silly.
 
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Man this author is terrible but I already set that expectation for him the moment he let the mc "randomize" his character in chapter 1. At this point I'm just here for the art, and only very occasionally will I actually read the text
Art is meh too. At least for me. The legs are often drawn is kinda ugly way, which for a leg fetishist like me is bad. So I am kinda in a limbo, bouncing between story and art, story annoys me - I bounce to art - the ugly legs annoy me - I go back to story - and so on and so on lol.
 
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That's laughable that you think I'm the minority. Also, it's pretty clear the only customization he was going to be allowed to do in the beginning was his appearance, which isn't a huge concern for min-maxers who will very much wear the goofiest equipment if it means getting the best stats and abilities. He very specifically noted that he didn't care what he looked like, he just wanted to get into the game asap and would adjust things to his liking later. That's a pretty common mentality for many players that are excited about a game. If your appearance normally doesn't affect gameplay (which it obviously didn't before the game became real,) then why bother doing some in depth customization of your looks?

Even if we do go off of the idea that he randomized his stats too, the MC was only a tryhard in the sense that he liked having the freedom to do whatever he wanted, hence his mentioning of his whole PKer phase, he's the type of player that loves experimenting with the game and pushing it to its limits, which is how he got to be the best, you don't get that way by common minmaxing, you get that way by taking calculated risks, like randomizing your build to force yourself to try something different, to see if something that seems sub-optimal, and therefore rather unexplored, can actually lead to some new possibilities, especially since the game has all sort of hidden classes and abilities baked into its premise.

Look, I'm not saying the writing in this series is great, there are some pretty glaring flaws in how the "let's keep the game's story on track" logic is applied (among other issues,) but the randomization choice most definitely wasn't one of them, and acting like it is is just silly.
You most definitely are in the minority, no need to get offended over it. That wasn't a dig at you or anyone else that plays like that. Point is that the 'average' gamer wouldn't resist the urge to customize their own character if given the option to, that's why when that decision was made in the first chapter it was heavily criticized by half of the comments in the thread. I feel like you're more defensive on this matter because you can personally relate to him, but not most people do which is why it just feels like a convenient plot device. Author definitely could have written it in a way where majority of people wouldn't have questioned it.
 
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You most definitely are in the minority, no need to get offended over it. That wasn't a dig at you or anyone else that plays like that. Point is that the 'average' gamer wouldn't resist the urge to customize their own character if given the option to, that's why when that decision was made in the first chapter it was heavily criticized by half of the comments in the thread. I feel like you're more defensive on this matter because you can personally relate to him, but not most people do which is why it just feels like a convenient plot device. Author definitely could have written it in a way where majority of people wouldn't have questioned it.
It's not even that, I just think it's a dumb criticism. Yes I can relate with the MC, though I can just as easily relate with an MC that struggles with character creation, but that's more because I can relate with the feeling of not wanting to wait a second longer to play a highly anticipated game, and that's not a minority sentiment. My point is, and always has been that just because YOU can't relate with scenario, it doesn't mean it's bad writing, especially when the scenario happens more often than you realize (this isn't even just based on my own experience, the fact is that not everyone cares as much about customization as you think, at least not enough to always want to start the character building from scratch.) Sometimes it's just better to hit random and then make adjustments later.
 
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It's not even that, I just think it's a dumb criticism. Yes I can relate with the MC, though I can just as easily relate with an MC that struggles with character creation, but that's more because I can relate with the feeling of not wanting to wait a second longer to play a highly anticipated game, and that's not a minority sentiment. My point is, and always has been that just because YOU can't relate with scenario, it doesn't mean it's bad writing, especially when the scenario happens more often than you realize (this isn't even just based on my own experience, the fact is that not everyone cares as much about customization as you think, at least not enough to always want to start the character building from scratch.) Sometimes it's just better to hit random and then make adjustments later.
Dude I'm not saying it doesn't happen, but the fact is people that prefer character customization far out weigh those who don't. It's exactly why most of the comments in chapter 1 were calling it out, because it's not a decision the average rpg gamer would make.

But you honestly shouldn't have taken my initial comment as constructive criticism in the first place, instead you should have interpreted it as me simply seeing signs that I wasn't going to agree with or like the authors creative process from there on out.
 
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I'm not going to lie, it started off well. Going to another world, dungeons, training and such. But then it got boring, it took about 60 chapters just for the MC to do something. I can't say I was reading, I was just rushing through the chapters. I think the story deteriorated a lot. I'm not surprised by the many novel readers criticizing in comments.
 
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why is author-san so dumb, mc dedication for protecting the plot only going to work if he actually protects the plot, author is making mc sound like a hypocrite by making him not want to affect it but also protecting it at the same time, while all these Reincarnators are wrecking havoc in the story (blond shawty included)
True. if he was actually going to protect the plot. The glasses character would have gotten kicked out of school and he would have quit school by now. Plus he keeps screwing up the mc. If you play the mc doesn't that farm locations you use to level your character. Should be canon actions he can take? So why is he not powering up the mc? He needs to help the mc gain power.
 

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