Welcome to Japan, Ms. Elf! - Ch. 59 - An Encounter with The Hero Candidate Part 4

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Page 21 "a shore that reaches me" -> "a sword that reaches me"

Anyway, thank you for your hard work.
 
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This arc has been the most boring part of the manga so far. I don't feel like this guy is an opponent worthy of receiving so many chapters.
 
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Man, all those overcomplicated talks about the barrier, and it was a simple brute force that took it down :wooow:

@KittyBlue9 is it naive persistence or steadfast? cause you used steadfast last chapter but naive persistence in this one
It keeps changing throughout the chapters, biggest reason i've got no idea what skills Kazuhiro really has (aside from obvious sleep travel).

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Page 6
  • "step foot in" -> "step a foot in"
Page 16
  • Perhaps nothing wrong there, but didn't Kazuhiro "fully" charge the blade earlier?
Page 23
  • "what they spelled the barrier", not sure but mayber it's supposed to be "what dispelled the barrier"?
Page 26
  • "You collide an equal amount of energy from an external attack", what? Something like "You oppose an external attack with an equal amount of energy", probably.
Page 29
  • Again, inanimate pronoun "it" instead of animate pronoun "he".
And, of course, as Simpleton above mentioned - page 21, "shore" -> "sword".
 
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