Welcome to Japan, Ms. Elf! - Ch. 60 - An Encounter with The Hero Candidate Part 5

[dontprepublish]

Honestly I’m sort of throw for a loop here because in the previous chapters the story was painting Eve to be this victim of love but going off what was shown (even if it probably wasn’t intended) Eve is basically directly responsible for the jackass prince’s bullshit, he doesn’t even remember how long he’s been alive and pretty much all of his insecurities and harshness stem from his feelings of paranoia and betrayal which she seemingly never tried to talk him out of, hell by the time we meet her she’s basically just along for the ride, enslaving women, stealing shit and killing kids just for the hell of it, I know the intent is that he supposed was acting as his “true self” after a while but given the level of sheer negligence and delusion Eve must be working off I’m inclined not to believe her at all, he definitely got what was coming to him, almost a fate worse than death if you think about it and given enough time they might repeat this whole situation hundreds of years later.

Nobody cares about slaver prince tho because MC FINALLY CONFESSED LETS GOOOOOOOO!!!

 

[Umbrum]

So I take it the guy whose name I don't remember is suffering of a sort of age-driven madness? kinda like he's senile and pulling crazy shit while having a better functioning brain and body? the concept is interesting but Eve should've let him die a long time ago.

 

[HYBRID_BEING]

So, Eve said all those sweet words about love, but she technically hypnotized Zarish from the beginning. He's a scumbag, who would bed charmed women (which is unanimously considered a rape), alright, but Eve did pretty much the same

And, anyway, how the hell did Zarish took off the ring and copied (?) it, if it was Eve's skill (kinda weird to call an artifact "a skill", but whatever)?

I don’t understand this panel on page 28. They didn’t sever ties with Eve but it’s all over (ie. they did sever ties)?

On page 36, what does Marie mean by

It’s not a serious expression~…

Does she think Kazuhiro isn’t serious (the drawings wouldn’t match though)?

I'm not exactly sure myself, but look below for my takes on those parts.

@KittyBlue9
Page 10

• "cut off your finger", should be plural "fingers" probably, as he had multiple rings (and multiple fingers to wear them on ). Same on page 27, 28.

Page 11

• "If it weren't for you, i would have end up fighting with a friend a had just made", nor really following any logic here If it weren't for the prick, she wouldn't even met Kazuhiro.

Page 14

• "Could you return this ring to me again?", uh, she already did. He is asking her to "put it on for him", it seems.

Page 28

• The third panel took me a bit to figure out. Kazuhiro is saying that he still regrets not cutting off Zarish's fingers, but thanks to Wridra's words he didn't had to severe ties with Eve, who he worked hard making friends with, is that's the idea?
• "If his finger had been lost, the subjugation contract with he wouldn't have happened", i guess Kazuhiro is talking about Eve mind controlling Zarish in the end, so here it definitely should be "fingers" (as in "all fingers"), and "lost" sounds kinda weird, considering he himself planned to cut them off. Also, "he" -> "him".

Page 35

• "I don't want to share you with anyone.", "share" seems like a very bad fit in context, at least go with "I don't want to see you with anyone else", or something.

Page 36

• "It's in Japanese, so no one else can understand. - It's not a serous expression~...", Marie's response doesn't make sense. Is it supposed to be a cliche "That's not what i meant!" phrase?

 

[TheProtectorOfPureHeartedGirls]

Sad to see Evelyn still not moving on from that bastard...

 

[TheProtectorOfPureHeartedGirls]

Who called seggs?!