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@TulipMoon Just a small thing to note on page 3 panel 3, the sentence "I want to rest after I having ate" doesn't make sense. I don't know Japanese but shouldn't it be something like "I want to rest after eating"? On the same panel that 1st bubble the word "if" shouldn't be there if you start the sentence with "since" which is a preposition that is always followed by a noun, complement or pronoun "we". OR you can remove "since" & keep "if" as a conjunction which also works but both don't really work grammatically. Sorry for being that guy, just really odd to read as a native English reader. Thanks for the chapter.
 
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@TulipMoon Just a small thing to note on page 3 panel 3, the sentence "I want to rest after I having ate" doesn't make sense. I don't know Japanese but shouldn't it be something like "I want to rest after eating"? On the same panel that 1st bubble the word "if" shouldn't be there if you start the sentence with "since" which is a preposition that is always followed by a noun, complement or pronoun "we". OR you can remove "since" & keep "if" as a conjunction which also works but both don't really work grammatically. Sorry for being that guy, just really odd to read as a native English reader. Thanks for the chapter.
No need to apologize, sincerely you help me a lot to improve the quality of the chapter!

Sorry for the rather silly question, but do you think something like "I think it's a good idea, because if we continue to stay here any longer we will burn ourselves out." would work for the first bubble in panel 3?
I was just about to go to sleep, so I'll probably do it tomorrow
 
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No need to apologize, sincerely you help me a lot to improve the quality of the chapter!

Sorry for the rather silly question, but do you think something like "I think it's a good idea, because if we continue to stay here any longer we will burn ourselves out." would work for the first bubble in panel 3?
I was just about to go to sleep, so I'll probably do it tomorrow
Ya that works & I see no grammatical errors with that sentence. Glad to know that my comment helped out & thanks again for the translations.
 
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I was thinking his uneasy feeling was gonna be jealousy or something, nope just ends up it was alcohol lol
 
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I feel there was a play on words that got lost in translation at the end.

Started with "umi" and ended with "UMO"
 

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