@TulipMoon Just a small thing to note on page 3 panel 3, the sentence "I want to rest after I having ate" doesn't make sense. I don't know Japanese but shouldn't it be something like "
I want to rest after eating"? On the same panel that 1st bubble the word "if" shouldn't be there if you start the sentence with "
since" which is a preposition that is always followed by a noun, complement or pronoun "we". OR you can remove "since" & keep "if" as a conjunction which also works but both don't really work grammatically. Sorry for being that guy, just really odd to read as a native English reader. Thanks for the chapter.