@Mizumachi i get that the payment was for compensation
that much is kinda self explanatory
but if the mercenaries are dead, why does it matter that the payment was revoked, they couldnt have gotten it anyways, they're dead
if its going to their family, why was it worded in such a way, y'know?
and if they were revived, the brief summary of the ongoing conflict between the mercenary and the Lord should have been depicted much differently
-we should have gotten the image of them being revived that way it can be established that there is a revive mechanic, if they didn't want to dump it in dialogue form
the grammar and spellings were off so im confused as to whether the story handled it poorly overall
or if translations were a tad bit off and things needed to be re-phrased and proofread to grant clarity