World Customize Creator - Vol. 8 Ch. 81

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Fell like the axe made another victim.
Which is good, this one was starting to get in my nerves but what a finale hm?
 
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I'm guessing the author axed it. It's almost like he got bored about halfway through. Didn't explore what the MC's power could really do. Didn't flesh out the main characters at all. The author was like "Ok so here's this whole world....Aight Imma go get a sandwich and a nap. Cya."
 
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The end was ...fine. Not too bad. Rushed, but it didn't feel too awful as the story lacked something midgame ....was it clarity? It became very political, which was its thing. It tried to portray different political situations of nations and how they are pitted against each other. I believe the hiatus in between the releases of the chapters (at least here on mangadex, don't know about Japan) broke the story's neck, though. Too much stuff was going on behind the scenes, too many characters have been introduced and you simply couldn't remember all of their names or even their existence later, if they appeared in like two chapters and then there is a release gap of 3 months in between new chapters. Sometimes it even has been 5 months, if I remember correctly. Those breaks in between and the story's complexity just didn't work.
Though the last few chapters felt like the complexity has been strongly reduced, which was the best thing the author could do in my opinion, as for the above given reason. (It didn't work out.) Also the release schedule stabilized to one release around every month. One could finally catch up to the story once again with ease. Well, the reduction of complexity seems to be a byproduct of the story being rushed to an end. The only regret in this hindsight is, that on that level of complexity the story could have run a few chapters longer and be rather enjoyable. We also could have had seen more closure to the characters. E.g. get MC and MLI (village girl) together, see how the princess ascends to the throne and how the city develops (maybe how a international railways are being build). We also could have seen, how the side characters are married off into a happy end too and all that kind of feel-good stuff. But if the cleanup at the end was strongly bound to the rushed end, I welcome both.

The MC's nature of being isekaied and OP was just a setup, like many stories do. It allowed the story to ride on the isekai hype and let the author have a MC, that can do crazy shit, when he needed to do something differently or wanted a quicker, more direct solution to a dilemma of the story. In that way MC actually is a cheat character, alright.
 
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@WillTell: "well... at least we got to see sexy Sun."

How could I have forgotten to mention that panel. She is something, isn't she?

Btw. There isn't the End-tag next to the last chapter. Is there still a raw left?
 
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Harem ending! If the lolibaba is part of the harem, then this is the best ending possible.
 
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Lot of politics, I like how the people of the world use their art especially wind art users as they the sole reason most kingdom skip using pigeons and horse to deliver message and warning, with the exception of the white clan but the usage of art didn't get elaborate more after the middle part.

The mc 'Yusuke' is pretty much the God will since dark god action would change the world mirroring what that God intended the world to be.

Too bad the end got rushed, I personally wouldn't mind some suspense before world peace since Yusuke power haven't been fully explored but making deadly weapon and complicated structure wouldn't benefit the world other than waste more lives and resources.

Yusuke have a lot of reps from the whole world from his feats and it's logical any world breaking invention to be unneeded as everything already in place for color peace.

Would love to see a continuation where the next Dark God of Change have to tackle the world technological level after the 300 years of color peace, unless Yusuke the last dark god to be picked.
 
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lol this spiralled downhill and then got axed.. glad it didn't get dragged out
 

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