Wortenia Senki - Vol. 7 Ch. 35

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There's a good story here but it needs like one more layer of adaptation to get there lol.

@Korvalus Thanks, I vaguely remembered most of that but I still thought I must have forgot something. This is an isekai where the author could stand to put in a few character intro boxes.
 
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> Even a women getting horn*ed to that dark elves.
As expected of the race who's one popularized the bikini armors...

> Page 22, when MC unsheathe his katana, i had this goosebumps for how cool his pose are. His blood vibes really transmitted to me to the bone...

> Holy shit... That Simone over there... I got charmed immediately... She's way too sexy
 
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Can't blame Mike, I'd have stared too if I were in his position
 
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I like this manga but its like the author has no idea of how to present his story
 
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Yeah, it totally feels like a chapter was skipped. Lol. I really like this manga, but sometimes it's a bit...
 
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On the last page lemme tell you something nice: just wait till the author of the novel waste 10+ chapters on furniture, costumes, etc when everyone wants plot progression.
 
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So you see a mansion owned by a group of pirates and you just nuke it with magic ? Fuck the servants or slave labour trapped in there I guess
 
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Feels like whoever's in charge of this manga has read all of the source material, but doesn't know how to tell the story to someone who hasn't.

Or it's like putting together an Ikea chair with half of the instructions missing. I dunno.
 
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basically we left him almost dead in ch32; ch33 was a "meanwhile" moment; in ch34 he was up and good like nothing happened and we don't know how, we came to know a girl named Hana (that we never saw) and she left (or run away...idk this also wasn't showed) and left them on the beach....
Now ch35 begins with them having already made contact with the pirates.....like, when author? Don't skip on actual important events, damn it all...
If this was a weekly manga, i bet we'd still have difficulties in understanding the story
 
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The pacing is all over the place, but if you reread the previous 2-3 chapters before any new one the story makes sense and there aren't really any plot holes, which already is better than a lot of manga. It is adapted from a novel, so I guess the mangaka is just including the most crucial parts without caring much for the in-betweens. And I do love Mikoshiba's no bullshit policy.
 
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So weird, what is the purpose of that candy story, why spend any pages on it
 

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