Yama, Kaimashita ~Isekai Gurashi mo Warukunai~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Deep in the Mountains of Another World

[lesseffective]

The first piece of feedback I would give is one that I would give to anyone else -- research the proper usage of like breaks in words instead of using them in arbitrary ways. This is most notable with your '-ing' words. Keep that all together instead of just breaking off the -ng on its own, that just looks really weird.

 

[Zacoras]

She can buy anything in her original world, maybe try buy some Tactical knife (of what in latin American lands call Machete), some sauce or marinate to the meat, and some garden tools to maintain the mountain or produce her vegetables

She mostly has 2M (if the fox keep the price that negotiate in the dream)

 

[Solipsist]

I've a friend who does that too.
I mean, gets annoyed at being spammed msgs from people she doesn't want to hear from -- rather than just block them.

 

[BetterEnd]

The first piece of feedback I would give is one that I would give to anyone else -- research the proper usage of like breaks in words instead of using them in arbitrary ways. This is most notable with your '-ing' words. Keep that all together instead of just breaking off the -ng on its own, that just looks really weird.

🫡

 

[Kefrayba]

Classic example of toxic parent. The "I forgive you this time" is also a manipulation red flag.

 

[AMicrowave]

Girl bought a flipwich from your girl Cathy, she needs one more to dual wield

 

[Kshatria]

how di she even grow her short hair (with bands) for work and them reverted again to short?
manga magic?

 

[Kshatria]

1 million yen for a mountain is extremely cheap, even the house bonus is more than that (i guess)

btw idk why, but the fox car looks like a fox, and yet mc car looks like a bloated fish lol