Yama, Kaimashita ~Isekai Gurashi mo Warukunai~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Deep in the Mountains of Another World

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The first piece of feedback I would give is one that I would give to anyone else -- research the proper usage of like breaks in words instead of using them in arbitrary ways. This is most notable with your '-ing' words. Keep that all together instead of just breaking off the -ng on its own, that just looks really weird.
 
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She can buy anything in her original world, maybe try buy some Tactical knife (of what in latin American lands call Machete), some sauce or marinate to the meat, and some garden tools to maintain the mountain or produce her vegetables

She mostly has 2M (if the fox keep the price that negotiate in the dream)
 
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I've a friend who does that too.
I mean, gets annoyed at being spammed msgs from people she doesn't want to hear from -- rather than just block them.
 
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The first piece of feedback I would give is one that I would give to anyone else -- research the proper usage of like breaks in words instead of using them in arbitrary ways. This is most notable with your '-ing' words. Keep that all together instead of just breaking off the -ng on its own, that just looks really weird.
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Classic example of toxic parent. The "I forgive you this time" is also a manipulation red flag.
 
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Girl bought a flipwich from your girl Cathy, she needs one more to dual wield
 
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how di she even grow her short hair (with bands) for work and them reverted again to short?
manga magic?
 
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1 million yen for a mountain is extremely cheap, even the house bonus is more than that (i guess)

btw idk why, but the fox car looks like a fox, and yet mc car looks like a bloated fish lol
 
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saw the first page and immediately thought she kinda looked like fuuko from undead unlock
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Wow, her mom is the worst. Colloquially and figuratively speaking, of course; in reality, she's at least not nearly as bad as Vickie Guerrero.
Unfortunately that type is too common.
If the mom does not work (likely in Japan), and there is not much in the way of life insurance or assets, they can becomes dependent on having a new husband. If new hubby only cares for his own kid...
Little sister is already trash in my books. I doubt she was unaware of a difference in how parents treat them.
They lived together for like a year, and she was 7 or 8 at the time. MC likely has not even been mentioned since she moved out if the mother never calls.
 
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Hmmm male fox meh gimme Yuri gimme gimme gimme gimme

Also shitty mom bad bad so far if properly developed it could just be that she focused to much on the younger daughter assuming the older competent enough to care for herself mamas are human too but so far she seem quite shitty here’s to hoping for mama redemption or karmic retribution
I mean she’s still a bad mom but maybe she can improve.

~Yuri enjoying Mama Overlord
 
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"Talking fox".
Named Inari.
Who performs miracles.

Girl.

If I meet a guy with six wings and a flaming sword who calls himself “Michael”, I think that's a bit more than a "bird person".
 
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They're little things, but I low-key love all the subversion of the tired-as-heck humdrum tropes in this genre.

That the protagonist of this sort of manga happens to be a girl (absolutely no reason for her not to be); that the mom is unexpectedly vaguely evil, yet that the first auntie she meets at the funeral is trying to make sure she gets her due fortune instead of take it. That she doesn't die or get forcibly summoned to the other world...

I suppose what I'm saying is, the grooves of this genre are so well-worn that it's nice to see someone actually writing their own story for once.

(Now, I'm too jaded to really expect it to last, but... ^^; )
 
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