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Hot girl died right away so gay.
Yami Baito Saki wa Isekai Deshita - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Can't earn money without fighting
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This seems completely disjointed.
Like, the main character seems to react to the deaths more strongly when he thought that they were fake, while going "Wow, I sure can't believe that." when finding out that they actually died for realsies.
Also, I am not sure what the point was of informing the participants that badly.
Like, you, as a morally dubious megacorp do want them to bring you that mcguffin resource, right? In that case, not properly vetting them and letting them drop like flies and casually commit teamkilling seems really counterproductive to that. Even if the "Oh, we don't take any responsibility for your deaths" kinda should've been a giveaway that death was a possibility, but it seems an evil that doesn't even raise stock prices, like, c'mon!?
Also yeah, massive minus points for killing the girl after making her look hot
Like, the main character seems to react to the deaths more strongly when he thought that they were fake, while going "Wow, I sure can't believe that." when finding out that they actually died for realsies.
Also, I am not sure what the point was of informing the participants that badly.
Like, you, as a morally dubious megacorp do want them to bring you that mcguffin resource, right? In that case, not properly vetting them and letting them drop like flies and casually commit teamkilling seems really counterproductive to that. Even if the "Oh, we don't take any responsibility for your deaths" kinda should've been a giveaway that death was a possibility, but it seems an evil that doesn't even raise stock prices, like, c'mon!?
Also yeah, massive minus points for killing the girl after making her look hot
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You're saying that like gantz writing was stellar or something. It's just good old edgy slop
Gantz had shit writing, and this feels like a discount knock off of said shitty writing.
Well.... hmmm... let's just say, this started as retarded as humanly possible. I hate, absolutely H-A-T-E stories that rely on character STUPIDITY to lay the foundation of the plot. These idiots actually saw "not responsible, even in death" on the contract but not one of them actually asked the fukn question?!?! That's the FIRST question any NORMAL human being is going to ask, "What do you mean by 'in case of death'? How can you die in a game?" If they're starting the story by pulling this nonsense in chapter one, the rest of the story is bound to be put together in the same shitty way. This garbage isn't worth a second look😮💨.
