Considering some of the other scanlations, not bad. The note are a good idea since you aren't used to it. Will help for you to find a way to remove the marks.
It's not actually that bad, and definitely preferable to nothing at all. I'd say keep it up until a propper group swoops in and takes it off your hands, or the previous guys decide to continue.
Hello! Aera here. I'll try to edit another chapter within this week. TT I'm sorry again for snitching, for the mistranslation and not comprehensible sentences. I'll make it better.
Please do leave a tip/advice about what translation app/sites should I use and how should I make it cleaner.
this is better than nothing at all, please keep translating! All in all that translation seemed smooth and made sense. Thank you sm for translating~! <33333