Good stuff, I must say. Even your translations were pretty great. As for the redraws, some areas looked pretty impossible (most people won't be able to draw a house) to get done nicely, so it's perfectly fine if you gave up. But I did remember seeing one or two spots where it looked like you got a little lazy. Like those areas with the text on a plain gray background. But, at least, you didn't go the easy way and cover up the pages with speech bubbles. Overall, I'd say, you did a great job. Even I'm doing a series right now (JK Musou), and I must say that even with an ultra simple software like paint 3d and barely any actual redraws (I usually just copy and paste similar looking parts from the page to cover up non speech bubbled text, instead of drawing over it by hand and leave any part that I feel are impossible to do, like if the text is arranged in a way that I can't replicate), it takes about half an hour on an easy page and sometimes 1 hour just to cover up the Japanese. So, if you managed to do it this well, you deserve appreciation.